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Please review my "salespitch" for a free give-away ebook

by JForsberg
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Without using any squeeze page or other fancy landingpage, I made a simple "giving away ......." page with some "get it now" buttons.

Please take a review and tell me what would be changed if you would ever consider acting on it.

Great Free Ebook Collection (The header)

(There's a picture on an ebook here)

You see the 7$ on the book? IGNORE IT!

I've decided to give this away for free.

Okay, so a free ebook you may say – what's so different with this one?

Here – this ebook contains “Think and Grow Rich” by Napoleon Hill AND 2 other ebooks with Master Resell Right.


ARE YOU CRAZY?

Yes, yes I am. But, I got a catch – just like anything else in this world, nothing is totally free.

So what's the catch really? Simple. I want you to join my team. In the welcome message, you will receive a download link.

Joining my team doesn't cost you money. Just 30 seconds to sign up.

Interested? Let Me Have It Already (Opt-in button)



Not just too sure yet what this would actually contribute to you?

Well, here's what this package contains:
Think And Grow Rich – Napoleon Hill
Social Networking Marketing + full Master Resell Right and salespage!
Super Affiliate Marketing + full Master Resell Right and salespage!
Bonus content!

The bonus content includes:
6 small reports written by me personally. My first attempt of an ebook
10 Traffic Tips
107 Traffic
Forbidden – how to use psychology in your marketing strategy
Mstories
Nonverbal Website Intelligence
SEO Made Easy



Not to forget.. The recommended price for the first 2 ebooks are 17$ each! With all their content, they range at 25$ value each.



So ask yourself this:

Can you really afford NOT to grab this offer?

It's right here to grab. Only a sign-up away.
GIVE IT TO ME (Another opt-in button)

And here's another thing. What you sign up to, can actually help you make even more money. So if you ignore this offer, then you're the crazy one here!



Make a wise choice now.



To your success,

Jonas Forsberg.
To see the original, just go here http://forsberg-marketing.com/free-e...ollection-mrr/
NOTE!!: I'm NOT promoting here - clicking the actual buttons redirects you to a sign-up page. (< So don't do it. If you want the content, PM me for a free link) I'm NOT asking for people here to join, SIMPLY asking for a review and what to change.
I hope this note saves the post from being deleted now that I've stated what the purpose is - and not making this thread for advertising.

Thanks,

Jonas.
#ebook #free #giveaway #review #salespitch
  • Profile picture of the author OutOfThisWord
    Jonas...

    ...take a good look at the marketers and consultants you are competing against and look and what they are doing and compare it to what you are doing.

    You may have a difficult time getting someone to hire/buy your marketing advice when you cannot quickly grab the prospect's attention, get them involved in your offer and make it easier to read your pitch than click away.

    You've got some work to do and again, go browse the WSOs would be a good starting point.
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