Can you guys have a look?

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Hey guys,
I'm pretty new overall. I've made a decent amount of money after signing up for this forum, doing lots of reading, and signing up for the War Room. I just finished creating my first page for getting emails. I originally just used Reno X's Auto Affiliate X landing page (one like this), but I wanted to customize it a little more and make a blog out of it. I'm just curious to see how you guys think it looks.

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Please let me know if you have any suggestions!

Thanks!
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  • Profile picture of the author Ralf Skirr
    2 Ideas for improvement:
    1. Put subscription box at the top, many people won t scroll down.
    2. Remove the subscribe button image, it does nothing, it directs attention AWAY from your actual subscription box, and it even has a link going nowhere.
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    • Profile picture of the author NickCesarz
      Thanks guys. I will move the subscribe box up to the top now too. As far as the video goes, just background music. Thanks again!
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  • Profile picture of the author sohagiu
    completely agree with Ralf. you could follow his direction.
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  • Profile picture of the author stephenwaldo
    Hey, another thought that might increase conversions is to remove the navigation and header sections. I don't know if it's possible with your theme, but I imagine that the higher up you can get your headline, video and subscription box, the better you'll do. All that other stuff seems distracting if the purpose of that page is to snag leads.

    Again, probably not a huge deal, just an observation.
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  • Profile picture of the author Randall Magwood
    Nice site. I would move the opt-in box higher, and also have a "hover ad" appear on the webpage also to increase conversions. The sales copy is pretty good tho.
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  • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
    Auto start video. Ugh. I clicked off immediately.
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    • Profile picture of the author Doctor Derp
      Originally Posted by travlinguy View Post

      Auto start video. Ugh. I clicked off immediately.
      Yep. This site is derp. Sorry bro... go to Themeforest.net and find a better template.
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    • Profile picture of the author Premier Plugins
      Originally Posted by travlinguy View Post

      Auto start video. Ugh. I clicked off immediately.
      Yea, auto start generally causes me to instantly close the page. Even worse is when I'm actually interested in reading what the page is about but I can't pause the video (like the OPs video). I leave every time without reading the page.
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  • Profile picture of the author AmazingP
    In light of better squeeze pages around, I think the whole thing needs to be changed altogether. I hope AAX would soon be thinking of creating new types of pages so to get better conversion.
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  • Profile picture of the author mycrowdsam
    dead for me...
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  • Profile picture of the author John Atkins
    Your link is not working.

    The opt-in page of the first page is a little messed up and the opt-in form isn't entirely above the fold.
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  • Profile picture of the author bloggerd
    Site dose not appear to be working, maybe it is that your doing some work on it will check back later
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    • Profile picture of the author rschmitz
      Someone bumped an 1.5 year old thread
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