three things a business owner MUST do to increase profitability
I started an offline business and I'm trying to write a brochure. I was wondering if anyone can give some critique to the headline that will appear on the front of brochure:
three things a owner MUST do to improve profitability and growth for their business.
Is it too long? Is it too short? is it just right.
Thanks in advanced for your guys opinion.
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