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I need a favour!

by Miraclem
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I'm writing this event page that I'm going to be posting up on facebook to do with a party in a nightclub and I'd like someone to go over the 2 or so paragraphs I wrote and re edit and adjust it to make it more appealing and more organized, I just want to see how you would write it! Please PM or reply to this thread and I'll pm you the writing I want you to look over and edit! Thanks!
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  • Profile picture of the author CharismaticMannequin
    Good luck getting anyone to respond to this nicely; 'needing' a favour, and basically telling someone to go out of their way to check your work won't go down too well.


    Just letting you know!


    Best of luck,


    Ben.
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  • Profile picture of the author Miraclem
    Ah where's the helping hand when you need it..were so focused on making money, sometimes we don't lend 5 minutes of our life to something doesn't really need to be paid for and someone asking for a favour
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    • Profile picture of the author Mark Andrews
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      Originally Posted by Miraclem View Post

      Ah where's the helping hand when you need it..were so focused on making money, sometimes we don't lend 5 minutes of our life to something doesn't really need to be paid for and someone asking for a favour
      You're off base. You're asking any one of a bunch of pro copywriters here to do your work for you completely free of charge.

      First this shows a complete lack of respect for us as copywriters and...

      Second, we don't do free.

      Put your hand in your pocket and draw out some cash instead of devaluing us to zero.

      Your request is as cheeky as they come.


      Mark Andrews
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  • Profile picture of the author loi77
    Copywriters are your biggest assets in IM, so they deserve to be paid WELL.
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  • Profile picture of the author JonMills
    favours LOL this thread is a funny one.

    When I have people offering me to take jobs for large amounts of money and I turn them away, do you think I would be taking on a unpaid job as a favour, especially for someone I don't know. It's not good business sense my friend.
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    • Profile picture of the author videolover7
      Wow. An up-close and personal example of the entitlement mentality.

      People do favors for friends.

      People do favors for people in need.

      Pretty tough to get people to do favors for strangers just trying to save a few bucks.

      VL
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      • Profile picture of the author Doceye
        Where the Hades is Mal when you really need him?

        Figuring I must be the next oldest cranky copywriter, allow me to respond to the OP: P*ss up and off.

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  • Profile picture of the author agico1
    o, i am always trapped in the same solution with you. i want to write something more attractive and appealing, only to find nothing.
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  • Profile picture of the author rjweaver10
    I've always been interested in peer editing. I think it saves money and it helps make sure your articles are top notch. Good luck!
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    • Profile picture of the author JakeDaly
      If you just would have posted the text of which you refer, you probably would have gotten a few good responses.
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