Copywriting for Non Profits

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Sales writing is sales writing.

I agree.

It doesn’t matter if you’re writing to sell “mind-enhanced water” (as one person who recently posted here wants to venture into)…

…Or help feed the painfully-starving children in Africa.

However…

There are very distinct differences between selling a product or service

…and inspiring people to donate to a Cause.

Because successfully targeting the emotions that persuade someone to believe in your Cause in one thing.

However…

Making your prospects have faith in your ability to utilize their donations properly…

and manifest the end result you’ve implanted in their minds is something else entirely.

Currently…

I’m writing for three separate not-for-profit organizations.

I’ve put in quite a bit of research time looking at HOW other non-profit outfits portray themselves.

What I found totally interesting was how virtually every organization I looked at (in the three markets I’m focusing my attention) almost go out of their way to NOT elicit emotion.

Every site was written in a drab, dry, content-style of writing.
Just providing basic information – without seemingly any desire to stir up any kind of deep-seated emotion to compel, you know… action!

That being said…

What they did do is (for the most part) is communicate what kind of donations are needed to make an impact for their Cause and articulate the logistics for distributing the money and goods.

Why is that… do you think?

Well…

One of the BIGGEST objections in the not-for-profit world is how donations are used (or not used.)

Making potential donors feel at ease and confidently demonstrate how funds are used is essential!

Of course…

It begs the question:

Does communicating specificity and accountability imply you have to write your copy in as one-dimensional of a way as possible?

HELL NO!

In fact…

If any market or industry demands stirring up people’s emotions…

…Writing for charitable Causes that sincerely want to make a difference is it.

Truly…

When you allow yourself to fully fathom your role as a non-profit copywriter and observe the injustices permeating the planet (from the domino effect of just YOUR Cause), there’s absolutely no shortage of emotion to convey and elicit.

The idea that, as a not-for-profit entity, you need to have a strictly business-like façade to be taken seriously by donors is complete rubbish.

And the point of this thread is to encourage ANYONE pursuing a non-profit to take off the gloves and BE REAL, BE SINCERE, BE HONEST… and go for the bleeping jugular!

After all…

The more people you can inspire to donate (by knocking them off of their emotional equilibrium), the more financial help you’ll have the POWER to strategically provide!

Mark Pescetti

P.S. There’s the notion that non-profits, especially the smaller ones, don’t have the financial capital to invest in copywriters. Sure, that’s definitely true. I even know a few copywriters (and Advertising Boutiques) that have donated their time and expertise to Causes they’re inspired by. However, there are TONS of non-profits with massive funding that intend on doing things right, because they realize that a proper investment will HELP them, HELP their Cause.

If you’re inspired to be a part of something that’s more than helping entrepreneurs successfully launch their latest “Make Money Like Me” audio, video and ebook series…

…Position yourself to capture some of these amazing not-for-profit Causes.

They need our HELP!
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  • Profile picture of the author sabinavarga
    I would add to what you said that there is a lack of knowledge of what copywriting is and how much copy can help.

    I worked with a non-profit organization not so long ago and they had 3 copywriters in their communications department. These 'copywriters' were interns and their job was to write content for the blog -- and what they produced was nowhere near copywriting, not even close to some interesting blog posts. The funny thing is that nobody knew or noticed that the job title and the job description had nothing to do with each other.

    Anyhow, it's not that they didn't have the budget to hire a copywriter (and I'm sure many would be willing to help for free for a good cause or campaign), it's that they had no idea what could be done.

    This is my experience. I'm sure other non-profits out there are more illuminated.

    And you're right that most of the stiffness in their communications comes from trying to appear business-like and build credibility.
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    • In the UK twice year there are TV programs - I guess you have similar shows in the States.

      "Children In Need" - every year

      "Comic Relief" - every alternative year

      "Sports Relief" - every alternative year

      All with an entertainment "theme" to raise money for charity.

      In between the "acts" they have heart achingly emotive films of celebrities visiting the most appalling, deprived and poorest places on earth.

      They deliberately turn up the emotions to maximum power.

      It's almost impossible to watch some of the films without crying (of course this is exactly the intention).

      Because... over the years...

      They've raised hundreds of millions for the charities.


      Steve


      P.S. They also continually emphasize that every penny raised goes directly to the charities.
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      • Profile picture of the author marciayudkin
        Mark,

        It's definitely not warranted to assume that if three big players in a niche all do the same thing, it's a wise thing to do.

        They could all be making a fundamental mistake. You seemed to be using that kind of logic in the beginning of your post.

        Here in Maui, every real estate company uses the same kind of stupid signage to get people to walk off the street into their open house. In big letters, the name of the real estate company, either the logo of the company or a photo of the agent, and the unit number. Almost never is there any other useful information on the sign. One that's out there today adds, "A must-see!" which is both uninformative and sadly inapplicable to that particular unit (I went to see it as it's in my complex).

        It would be illogical for me to observe all this and then conclude that the real estate companies know what they're doing when it flies in the face of everything we copywriters know about selling.

        Perhaps I've misunderstood your point - it was a little hard for me to follow your thinking.

        Marcia Yudkin
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        • Profile picture of the author Mark Pescetti
          Originally Posted by marciayudkin View Post


          Perhaps I've misunderstood your point - it was a little hard for me to follow your thinking.

          Marcia Yudkin
          That's what I get for writing when I'm under the weather.

          Post in a nutshell:

          Nonprofits benefit from copy just as much as any business.

          However...

          It seems like everyone feels that presenting a stuffy, one-dimensional, emotionless facade is what's appropriate to earn the potential donor's respect.

          They ARE making the SAME fundamental mistake.

          So many of the nonprofits out there could be bringing in WAY MORE donations - if they were really speaking to the deepest emotional realities that their Causes stand for.

          Also...

          I noticed that a lot of these nonprofits try to adhere to a certain level of keyword density.

          They're NOT receiving the kind of information and advice they need to be effective for their Cause. (Could be from lack of budget... and could be from a lack of KNOWING what's available.)

          It just seems to me that this market is ripe for new awareness's.

          Lastly...

          Keep in mind...

          A lot of these nonprofits gain exposure from offline networking.

          So when people do go onto the website for more information...

          ...and discover drab content, rather than emotionally-driven copy, the chances of "making the sale" lowers dramatically.

          Mark Pescetti

          P.S. I used to live on Maui - first in the Iao Valley... then later in Haiku. I hear the island has changed a LOT since I left there for Kauai in '92.
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  • Profile picture of the author The Marketeer
    Thanks for sharing your findings with us.

    I agree with all your points.

    There's no reason why we can't demonstrate accountability AND tap into important emotions at the same time. It would be worth testing this.

    We're not marketing to robots. We're marketing to human beings and human beings have feelings and emotions which drive us to do many things that we wouldn't normally do.

    The emotional side of non profit causes is equally important. If we can communicate the pain that the end user is feeling then that would be an equally important motivating factor towards taking action.

    Why limit ourselves to one technique when sometimes a combination of techniques can achieve a better result.
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  • Profile picture of the author colmodwyer
    What non-profits are you studying? I've barely looked at the niche, but from what I've seen offline they hit very hard emotionally. Typical with sad personal stories.

    They also hire top-gun direct response writers.

    Colm
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    • Profile picture of the author Mark Pescetti
      Originally Posted by colmodwyer View Post

      What non-profits are you studying? I've barely looked at the niche, but from what I've seen offline they hit very hard emotionally. Typical with sad personal stories.

      They also hire top-gun direct response writers.

      Colm
      The one I'm working on today is in the Books for Children niche.

      I'm also doing one for creating dog and cat sanctuaries (comparing it to fixing strays, feeding homeless pets, etc.) This one is funded by a few celebs...

      And one more to stop the slaughtering of wild horses.

      Share some links...

      ...I'd love to see what you found...

      Mark Pescetti
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