Want to See What $500 Will Buy ya? Look at My Crap Copy & Drop a Desperate Fella a Line :)
In the past week, I have grown a new and even more immense appreciation for the skills and abilities that a skilled and experienced copy writer can bring to the table...my hats off to you guys and gals out there!
Anyway...
That brings me around to a little background information on how such a crappy copy has brought me out of this world conversions of 0.00%!! Yep...that's right...THREE Zeros Baby!
And the best of it is...
I didn't write it myself
I actually hired out the work for $500 to a "raved" about writer on Elance, and tried to follow Vin Montello's advice as close as possible. Now I wish I had moved far more funds over to the sales copy instead of everything else.
After going for broke, and putting everything out on the line with this project (development and other wired hired was very costly), I'm down to my last couple hundred dollars in available funds. So hiring out someone like Vin would just not be possible....not to mention his booked schedule...and of course other top copywriters would pose the same issues.
So options am I left with here today?
Doing it myself with as much input and help from the pros (that's you) as possible, and not the "pro" that I hired out initially who obviously missed the mark....by a long shot.
So for the first time ever...on the Warrior forum I am going to reveal the project I sorta had under wraps for a while. I have decided against recruiting affiliates at the moment or even letting affiliates from clickbank promote my product. I just can't ethically do that to them, when I know the sales copy doesn't convert worth a damn, and my affiliate center is just about done, and will be nothing like what anyone has experienced before...with HUGE commissions to boot.
So are you ready for the horror that is my sales copy?? The sales copy that doesn't sell, doesn't make sense (in some parts) and has totally missed the mark...
Ok boys and girls....tear it apart....and experience that which is my sales copy
MUCH...MUCH...MUCH Thanks in advance towards anyone who can help!!!!!
Mike
P.S. Traffic sources aren't exactly the biggest problem at the moment and range from PPC ads, to articles, blogs, organic traffic, forums, referrals, email lists. A good portion of the traffic is top notch, and some of it is rather broad.
P.P.S I've already been asked about the price (not by customers, but by other IM buddies), and I do want to keep it there at $97 for right now. After dwelling in this market for some time I'm very confident that the price isn't anywhere near the problem. The value of the service and product is immense when compared to anything else out there, and compared to what these people are spending on all their efforts, this is a drop in the bucket in relation. So I would like to run with this price for a bit longer unless other concrete evidence shows otherwise (towards needing a price drop).
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