Bravely requesting Sales Page critique
Have a bash at writing some copy yourself. Bung it back on the forum for a review. Stand well back... Be blasted with scathing comments. Just try and roll with the punches. Revise your copy and rewrite it. Or... Save yourself untold grief, hassle and time. And pick a copywriter to craft the perfect, high response sales pages for you. |
www.heroicmoney.com/indexold.asp (old version I started with)The site pitches an ebook I wrote which was inspired by the tremendous thread, "What to do if you're desperate". Through this book I hope to help folks meet their needs and make enough dough to buy some baubles for my wife and daughter. At some point I may be able to hire a copywriter, but I fear DIY is my only option at the moment.
I recognize full well that:
- I'm new at this gig;
- Many here make well-earned gazillions for writing copy;
- I'm asking for your help hat in hand, with nothing but a free copy of an ebook as payment, and
- My copy is likely to... um... generate some suggestions (up to and possibly including "kill it before it multiplies").
[edit: The yellow blocks will ultimately contain flowery praise from reviewers, and I'm considering another bonus or two and a link to a sample page.]
Thanks in advance,
-Tim
(seriously - thanks for your help)
Owner of Di Carlo Agency