May I please have my sales letter critiqued?
I'm venturing into a new realm here of offline direct mail marketing for my new store and I'd like a critique of my sales letter.
The concept - I'm targeting the Vegas Wedding Chapels with a direct mailing and enclosed samples and I'm trying to come up with a sales letter that will make the chapel proprietors want to try something different - at least feel compelled to stop by the website.
That's the premise.. here's the letter:
http://www.the-bookmarks-store.com/a...s-sales-letter
And the letter, once in its final form, is also going to be the new website page 'vegas-weddings.html' (it's not built yet).
Thanks everyone!
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