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You know one of the biggest reasons why every sentence must have a very deliberate purpose in your long form sales copy?

Because very rarely do people read a sales letter from the beginning to end.

Most people, even those who buy, only read bits and pieces of your copy.

They scan and skim through it, looking to see if something catches their attention...

...and captures their imagination.


Every statement and question has to sell prospects... individually... and collectively.

That means...

The benefits of your product or service should be evenly woven throughout your copy
, so no matter where one of your prospects settles down and starts reading...

...they'll FEEL the impact your solution creates in their lives.

A few tips:


Make sure your headline and sub-headlines really set the tone for the following copy.

A lot of readers just read the headlines (big letters).

If one of those messages (in the headline) really gets them curious, the follow-up copy must grab them by the hand and make them forget about having no real intention of reading the whole page.

Utilize your post scripts for personal and social proof.

I've done this for ALL of my clients so far this year and it's been working out fantastically.

Why?

Well...

A lot of prospects jump from the headline to your P.S.

If one (or all) of your post scripts entice the reader, they'll likely scan back up and find a place to settle into your letter...

...making them much more apt to buy RIGHT NOW!

If you have social proof (e.g. testimonials or reviews), make sure to sprinkle them throughout the copy.

The idea behind ZMOT (i.e. Google's Zero Moment of truth) is that more people buy based upon the reviews that current customers or clients are inspired to give, rather than what you say in your sales copy.

In other words...

One testimonial can be more effective in converting sales than pages and pages of copy.

You can even use testimonials as sub-headlines - as they can really set the tone for your next big idea/message.

Also...

Make sure you spell out the consequences of BOTH owning your product (or participating in your services)...

And...

Failing to take action.


If prospects don't feel like they're leaving something on the table, there's a big chance they won't press the buy button.

So make sure you have consequence (positive and negative) distributed throughout your copy.

It's a good attention grabber.

The point being...

You always have to make sure you're taking advantage of the awareness that most people don't read from beginning to end.

NOT crafting your copy in acknowledgement of this TRUTH will screw you over big time!

Mark Pescetti

P.S.
I've not only installed Clicktale coding in my own sales letter (and my client's copy), but I've also used discounts and promotions in-return for customer feedback. This really produced some amazing insights about the reader's various experiences and helped me implement more effective strategies in the copy.
#effect #skimming
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    Great post. That's so true about customer reviews. In fact, I read them to see if there is anyone who has the exact type of problem I have, and if so, how that product/service solved it.

    Here's a small irritation I have with a claim like: "Buy My Amazing Product "Super List" Because It Will Increase Your List By 500%!"

    Okay, buckaroo. Fine. But quit highlighting client testimonials that say things like, "Ooo... I loved this course because it gave me exactly what I needed to increase my list!"

    Wrong answer. (At least for me.)

    I'm looking for a client testimonial that says something like this:

    "Wow! After slaving away for months to try to build my measly list to over 50 people, I got Super List Program, and this was after I tried everything! Within two weeks, my list went from 50 to 250! And all it took was a few changes on my website. Basically, after learning these secrets, I spent a few hours changing some things (without churning out extra promotional messages on the social media sites), and THAT was the return I got!"

    I want very specific testimonials if anyone is going to claim a quantifiable result from using their product. I don't want to hear vague results. It just comes across as someone trying to blow smoke up my @$$.

    ETA: In the vast scheme of things, client testimonials can also be seen as suspect,; but at least with a little more detail, it seems more authentic.
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