My first ever sales letter [Video] Please critique to your best ability
First off,
I've never written a sales copy before but I've been through enough to know what sounds good to me and what doesn't
I also studied a few copy writing books, and took a small course on video sales letters.
And I have a few years of psychology background in college.
Other than that, this is my first go at copy writing/video sales letters.
I hope you'll critique it in ways that help me increase sales, not in ways you think will make it sound or look better to you... because at the end of the day, a sales letter's main purpose is to sell
My targeted audience is people who want to make money.. I have two sales videos, each addressing different people. The first video mainly addresses people who don't know what internet marketing is/don't know that you can make money online.. and the second video addresses people who are struggling to make money online.
And yes, I know that some of my claims are bs, my testimonials will be fake, and I don't actually have much credibility.. but I can guarantee that the method I present the viewers will make them money.
My aim is to get viewers to relax and let the words fly into their brains rather than have them actively read through a copy and criticize everything. That's why I chose to make it a video copy instead of regular copy
Please try your best to constructively criticize it.. I could use all the professional help I can get.
About the sales video:
Traffic will be sent to a sales page, and there will be the first video that comes on autoplay
the first video ends with a question/cliffhanger (raises interest and curiosity)
and then viewers will most likely click through to the second page with the link below the first video
and then the second video will play
This is the first video (The empty part at the end is for testimonials which I'll add later)
http://youtu.be/zAyti7D2bz0
Visitors will then click through to second video
https://vimeo.com/44415725
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