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Critique My Squeeze Page 2.0 - See what you think this time around!

by Karson
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Alright! Thanks for the help guys! Had plenty of suggestions to change quite a bit last time. Lets go for round 2!

Check it out here:
http://www.karsononline.com/get-wp-optins/

Also, if you want the plugin I still have it for free with no optin for a couple more days until I get this squeeze page just right. You can find that link in my signature!

Thanks again guys! Looking forward to what you got to say!
#critique #page #squeeze #time
  • Profile picture of the author Andrew Gould
    Why not use the plugin to create the squeeze page?

    And then your pitch virtually writes itself.
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    • Profile picture of the author Karson
      LoL indeed I have just used optipress that I am used to it.

      I actually like some of the features WP Optins has compared to optipress. Figure I will make one and split test it! Thanks!

      Tear it apart guys! I want your feedback!
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      • Profile picture of the author Geordie John
        Here's my two cents...

        1. The page feels too 'busy' to me - it looks crowded, too much going on, it's distracting for me.
        2. Having two opt-in boxes is confusing
        3. In my browser the page is a little longer than my screen, so i have to scroll to see it all, which again i'm not overly fond of for a squeeze page.

        Thanks
        John
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  • Profile picture of the author Karson
    Thanks John! Still a bit busy and maybe go down to one opt in box and just a bit long for the browser. Taking note of all three.

    For anyone that comes next is the optin on the bottom of the page above the fold for you?

    May come up with a really simple page and see how it works out too. Split test them.

    Thanks,
    Karson
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    • Profile picture of the author andrewkar
      I like second option from old post more. This one is very busy...

      What I would do?

      1) image of the product to the top and sign up box right below.
      2) video presentation to the left and bigger. With headline above.
      3) ditch the banner.
      4) just few short and powerful bullets below the video.
      5) autoplay with no controls (only pause)

      Actually go here and have a look... Conversion Clambake Replay
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      Do what you want to do!
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