First-time copywriter looking for criticism
I've been writing normal/seo articles for a while and I thought I'd try my hand at copy writing to expand my repertoire. I've been reading over AWAI's stuff and got Randy Gage's "copywriting stud" book and have just finished reading it(only skimmed, will definately go over it again and a third time)
Here is my first attempt at a sort of opt-in/sales page: URL reverted back to normal site
I didn't do any bullet points as I'd be going over the clients website and giving him a custom report, and then go from there with selling. I tried my best to keep it short, personal and invoke emotion, but even I can tell I've still got a long road ahead to becoming truly great.
Obviously you've gotta be critiqued to learn from mistakes, so go ahead
Andrew Gould
Andrew Gould