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Looking for a Copywriter to critique my work and Review (and potentially mentor me)

by KevinJamesMcAuley
8 replies
Hi folks,

Maybe this is not the right place to put this but no harm intended if not.

Basically I have just written a sales letter for a new facebook marketing service I want to roll out. I think its decent enough but I want to get it reviewed by a really good copywriter to get some feedback and advice.

I put the job on oDesk but just not getting the quality there. If you fit the bill and have a proven track record of producing copy that works please gimme a quote or a PM.

Much appreciated.

Maybe if it is more inline with the community of the forum I could share it on here and get some feedback?

Thanks
#copywriter #critique #mentor #potentially #review #work
  • Profile picture of the author Steve The Copywriter
    Hi Kevin,

    You will get very useful feedback if you post it (you might not have enough posts to use the link - but just type it and someone will do it for you).

    But it's only for the brave (lol).

    Many warriors are not shy when it comes to criticism.


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  • Profile picture of the author travlinguy
    Be specific about what you're selling and put up a link. If you don't have enough posts for that, create a sig file and put it there. Your budget will be helpful in screening too.
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  • Profile picture of the author aandersen
    I agree with Steve and Charles. If you want a community critique, just put the link in your sig and let us have a go at it. You'll get a mixed bag in return. Beware...

    Originally Posted by steve

    But it's only for the brave (lol).

    Many warriors are not shy when it comes to criticism.
    He's not kidding.

    If you need a pro-review, don't have time filtering the feedback, and just want answers you can take to the bank, paying is smart. There's a lot of people willing to do it for you -- some more qualified that others.

    I'll tell you this: some of the pros make incredible wf-only critique/review/rewrite offers now and then.

    You never stated you budget or niche so it's hard to make a specific referral. I do, however, have a couple people who jump to the front of my mind.

    I'll send you a PM with their info.
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  • Profile picture of the author deezn
    If you need or want mentoring I believe Paul Hancox and Raydal offer ridiculously cheap 6 month programs. I've seen high praise for both.
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  • Profile picture of the author Rezbi
    Originally Posted by KevinJamesMcAuley View Post

    (and potentially mentor me)
    Make sure you get someone who knows what he or she is doing.

    If you get mentored by a monkey you'll write like a monkey.
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  • Profile picture of the author Rezbi
    I don't know what's going on here.

    In the above post I wrote 'by' but the system keeps changing it to 'buy'.
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  • Profile picture of the author shawnlebrun
    rez.... who doesn't want to buy a monkey?
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    MILLION Dollar Copywriter Offering Written Sales Letter or VSL Script Worth $5,000 - Just $500!
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    • Profile picture of the author Rezbi
      Originally Posted by shawnlebrun View Post

      rez.... who doesn't want to buy a monkey?
      Me.

      There's too many walking around where I live. :p
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