Anyone want to help with my radio script?
I have decided to produce my latest radio ad myself as the station I'm looking to advertise on has decided to quote me crazy money. Equity voice over + production cost from thrid party is like 10% of what they are charging me.
This however means that I have to write the scrpt myself. Not a problem really since I have done this before and my own marketing for several years, but I have set myself the challenge of getting a more qualified lead call up to cut out the time wasters. A tough thing to do in 30 seconds worth of adspace and my script I have written so far is coming up about 8 seconds too long.
We offer a distance learning training programme with a work placement at the end (we dont charge companies a recruitment fee so have more jobs available than qualified candidates).
Can any help spice this ad up and shave about 8 seconds off it? I'll give you a big sloppy wet kiss if you do!
script 1
Attention: The skills shortage in IT is getting worse!
The recession has made companies reluctant to spend money on training their staff creating a wealth of opportunities for certified IT technicians.
At xxxxxxxxx.co.uk we provide an into work training program that can take you from a basic pc user to the level of IT technician and guarantee to find you work or your money back.
Take lessons from home in your spare time and start your new career at your own pace. See for yourself with our free 7 day trial. Call xxxxxxxxxxx to talk directly with a trained career advisor or visit us online at xxxxxxxxx.co.uk.
script 2
Have you considered a career in IT?
Due to recent nationwide budget cuts, employers are no longer offering their staff training. This has led to an increasing skills gap with not enough certified IT technicians to fill the jobs.
At xxxxxxxxx.co.uk we provide an into work training programme that gets you the IT certificates that employers are looking for. You can study at home in your spare time and if we do not find you work once you qualify we will refund your training fee.
See for yourself with our free 7 day trial. Call xxxxxxxxxxxxx to talk directly with a trained career advisor or visit us online at xxxxxxxxxxxx.co.uk.
Many thanks
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