Please help me critique my 1 page direct mail piece
I have a little favor to ask of someone who would be willing to pay it forward and do a courtesy critique for me. I have a 1 page sales letter that I will be mailing. I already have it written. I would be deeply grateful and appreciative if you could take a look at it and make some suggestions and help me tweak it for optimal impact.
I would rather not post the sales letter publicly, for the simple fact of the competitive nature of the niche and I really don't want anyone "stealing" this letter from me. I'm sure you can understand. Please PM me and I'll be glad to PM the letter to you.
Thank you so much in advance for taking the time to help a fellow Warrior who truly appreciates and respects the talents of copywriters.
Jason
Direct Response Copywriting