Rate my press release, please
My name is Kate and I am a part of Synaptic Wave iOS dev team. We plan to release a new game in a week or two and to issue a press release about it. Please, read it and post your comments. English is not my first language, so I'd also appreciate if you pointed out mistakes. Chances are these weren't intentional.
One last notice: we'll distribute the release through prMac, so I suppose that I shouldn't add 'game for iPhone' to the headline. Am I right?
Thank you in advance!
[Headline]
Announcing Charge the Zombie - an action-arcade mix ready to enchant you
[Summary]
Synaptic Wave is happy to announce the release of Charge the Zombie, its outstanding game for iPhone, iPad and iPod. Charge the Zombie isn't limited with one genre only. It's a masterful combination of an arcade, action and strategy game. You will plan out your rounds carefully, choose the path to develop your weapons, and enjoy the intensive electric action of countless Charge the Zombie rounds. This innovative mix excites almost everyone from new iDevice adopters to long time evangelists.
[Body]
[Summary repeated - should we do this?]
The first and the most important highlight of Charge the Zombie is the elegant way it combines strategic thinking and rapid action. You will get all the time you need to explore special weapons and new skills, compare different opportunities and roads to go by and choose the best one between the rounds. But as soon as you will call a new round your time for picky strategizing will be over. You'll find yourself in the thick of blietzkrieg. That's when you'll have to summon all your swiftness or else you'll drown in brainthirsty waves of zombies.
An immense replayability is the second strong point of Charge the Zombie. You'll never get bored with its rounds as you'll always face something new. Various zombies with quirky skills and dangerous weapons will invent different tactics and they will bunch up to keep you on toes. Each time you play you'll be delighted with a novel approach and new challenges.
Another highlight is the variety of roads to choose. You'll get numerous power-ups, from special weapons to useful passive abilities. A powerful death ray, fatal toxic mines, instant time freeze and a devastating earthquake are all here to make slashing the zombies effective and exciting. Moreover, the specials are all upgradable. Prepare to have a tough choice between increasing the speed of energy recovering and upgrading an E-Storm to the next level.
And there's one more thing about Charge the Zombie, something that connects all the features to create an exciting game. Charge the Zombie has a unique atmosphere of fun and vigor. The cunning cartoony zombies, the green battlelawn and the leaning house appeal to almost all the gamers of any age. We've spiced the game up with spectacular visuals and energetic music - all to keep you entertained for hours.
If you want to impress your readers and introduce them to the beautiful world invaded by mischievous zombies, don't hesitate to contact us for a promocode.
Device requirements:
* iOS ??
* iPhone, iPod, iPad ??
* MB ??
Pricing and availability:
Charge the Zombie is available for $?? or equivalent.
Links to our screenshots, landing page, etc.
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