Broken Headline here at warrior forum

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I Made Just Under $6,000 Inside a Week.

Wouldn't that headline be better to state it positively?

I Made Over 5,000 Inside a Week.

Wouldn't that work better? It also reads easier.
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  • Profile picture of the author adsassist
    Originally Posted by masterpaintingnow View Post

    I Made Just Under $6,000 Inside a Week.

    Wouldn't that headline be better to state it positively?

    I Made Over 5,000 Inside a Week.

    Wouldn't that work better? It also reads easier.

    Did you make that much in a week?
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  • Profile picture of the author Alex Cohen
    Originally Posted by masterpaintingnow View Post

    I Made Just Under $6,000 Inside a Week.

    Wouldn't that headline be better to state it positively?

    I Made Over 5,000 Inside a Week.

    Wouldn't that work better? It also reads easier.
    Specifics work better than generalities.

    State the exact amount you made. Also the exact number of days.

    Alex
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  • Profile picture of the author Andrew Gould
    The gentleman's referring to a banner ad that's been running on the forum.

    The reason it says it like that is because it's a quote from a testimonial - it'd be a stronger ad if that was made clear.
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  • Profile picture of the author masterpaintingnow
    Alex, so no rounding up or anything?

    I Made $5,324 In a Week?
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