Wrote my copy and would appreciate some feedback
I am not a writer and english is not my first language either but I still decided to write a copy for one of my product.
I feel I understand my market better than most people and I should give it a shot and see what happens.
My product is in dating niche and can be very offending to some people, so please be warned before you click the link.
However if you can, I would love to get few pointers. I am not sensitive so you can critique freely.
The copy is about selling a program where I teach men to meet women outside of bars and clubs.
My clients are usually male between 24-45 with an average income of $5k a month.
Obviously they are struggling to get women.
Currently all my sale for this product comes from clients who have bought my intro product or have already heard about me. I am hoping to convert new visitors to this page and I might even sell it on clickbank for additional exposure.
Hope this gives you some idea about my intention behind this copy.
And here is the link to my copy: Social Circle Dating | Social Circle Game | Social Circle Mastery
Thanks very much in advance!
-Magic
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