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Which Among These Is The Best Title In Your View ?

by Spencer Jones
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Help me chose the best title for my next blog post. Tell me which among these is the best title in your view and why.

1. My power strategy to find low competition hot niches with hungry buyers

2. Affiliate marketing will never be the same again - My Reverse Affiliate System

3. My powerful system to find endless supply of money making keywords

4. Finally get predictable results with affiliate marketing using my Reverse Affiliate System

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Dr.Spencer Jones
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  • Profile picture of the author IMHypeless
    Some additional info about your blog (post?) would be helpful. As it is, I'm not a fan of either option. Addressing the reader more would be a good idea...you can always go with time-proven "How you can find low competition hot niches with hungry buyers" or something like that...

    More experienced copywriters could probably offer better ideas if you provide more info.
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  • Profile picture of the author NicholasWilliam
    Try a much of different ones out and see how it goes!

    But personally, I like number 4
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  • Profile picture of the author planck
    I got the line for you

    A line jamb-packed with the most powerful words in the english language

    A line that will get your audiences to action

    A line that works

    "Hypnotic Keywords That Bank Big Bucks"

    Ain't that genius eh?

    Pure genius

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  • Profile picture of the author Jerome Y
    to be honest, i don't feel like any of these titles have an enough "umph" to them. Like IM hypeless said, you haven't addressed the audience enough by using the word "You". This in itself is very powerful. Also, I noticed you don't have many "armour piercing bullet" words. These are words that immediately catch some of the audiences' attention right away.

    For example,
    "My power strategy to find low competition hot niches with hungry buyers"
    could be changed to
    "See how YOU can uncover liquid RED-HOT niches virtually with almost NO competition filled with starving buyers with my tested and proven strategies !"
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    • Profile picture of the author Spencer Jones
      Originally Posted by CardJY View Post

      to be honest, i don't feel like any of these titles have an enough "umph" to them. Like IM hypeless said, you haven't addressed the audience enough by using the word "You". This in itself is very powerful. Also, I noticed you don't have many "armour piercing bullet" words. These are words that immediately catch some of the audiences' attention right away.

      For example,
      "My power strategy to find low competition hot niches with hungry buyers"
      could be changed to
      "See how YOU can uncover liquid RED-HOT niches virtually with almost NO competition filled with starving buyers with my tested and proven strategies !"
      Sorry, That title is bit too long for a blog title...
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  • Profile picture of the author SOIN
    Number 4...
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  • Profile picture of the author nicolasgb
    I voted #1 because I like the words "My power strategy".
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  • Profile picture of the author GiantRumblebuffin

    1. My power strategy to find low competition hot niches with hungry buyers

    "power" is a bit old and people will spot this as marketing spiel
    "low competition hot" - this is just bad grammar, it doesn't make sense, it should read: "find low-competition niches that are hot and packed with buyers"... or something like that

    2. Affiliate marketing will never be the same again - My Reverse Affiliate System
    This is not exciting to me because "never be the same again" is a cliche - it's been used too much,

    3. My powerful system to find endless supply of money making keywords
    Again, powerful... use a thesaurus and find a more original word
    This is actually my favorite so far... but it could be improved by making it a compelling proposition

    eg. "Find out how my radical system finds you an endless supply of money-making keywords"

    - see how I made the key verb more active and addressed the title to the reader? And that's for free cause I'm new here

    4. Finally get predictable results with affiliate marketing using my Reverse Affiliate System
    I like "finally get predictable results" but it isn't emotive enough... basically you need to write in a way that will make people feel the pain of not having predictable results

    Good luck!
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  • Profile picture of the author blackli0n
    #4 cuts right to the benefit.
    #1 is good if you're a big name in your field.
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  • Profile picture of the author ComputerChris
    I actually like #2.
    2nd place would be #4
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  • Profile picture of the author kasei
    Number 4, and definately not number 3
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  • Profile picture of the author Sandor Verebi
    Originally Posted by Spencer Jones View Post

    Help me chose the best title for my next blog post. Tell me which among these is the best title in your view and why.

    1. My power strategy to find low competition hot niches with hungry buyers

    2. Affiliate marketing will never be the same again - My Reverse Affiliate System

    3. My powerful system to find endless supply of money making keywords

    4. Finally get predictable results with affiliate marketing using my Reverse Affiliate System

    Thanks
    Dr.Spencer Jones
    Hi Spencer,

    I'll be short. No offense please, but what if I suggest you a new one:

    Result Oriented Affiliate Marketing with Reverse Affiliate System

    Have a successful day,

    Sandor
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  • Profile picture of the author GrantFreeman
    None of the above? Some suggestions..

    [My power strategy to find low competition hot niches with hungry buyers]

    Discovered: Who Said Red-Hot Niches Are Hard To Find? New, Low-Comp Strategy..

    Hot Niches, Bigger Riches. Try THIS Strategy..

    Grant
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  • Profile picture of the author Jonas Glad
    The first one is definitely the best one...
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    "Judgment Day for Affiliate Marketers!"
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  • Profile picture of the author sethczerepak
    Two is the strongest one, but honestly they're all pretty weak. Too long. You can get the point across with a lot more punch. Check it out....

    "Hot niches + low competition + hungry buyers = The Reverse Affiliate System"
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  • Profile picture of the author Spencer Jones
    I think I am getting biased results as I left the poll results openly viewable... :0
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  • Profile picture of the author Sarah Harvey
    I went with two for a very specific reason. If I was an affiliate, this title would not only catch my attention but alarm me.

    2. Affiliate marketing will never be the same again - My Reverse Affiliate System
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  • Profile picture of the author chrisnos
    Originally Posted by Spencer Jones View Post

    Help me chose the best title for my next blog post. Tell me which among these is the best title in your view and why.

    1. My power strategy to find low competition hot niches with hungry buyers

    2. Affiliate marketing will never be the same again - My Reverse Affiliate System

    3. My powerful system to find endless supply of money making keywords

    4. Finally get predictable results with affiliate marketing using my Reverse Affiliate System

    Thanks
    Dr.Spencer Jones
    4 because it actually promises something the reader is looking for more than anything (predictable results).
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  • Profile picture of the author alistair
    Personally I wouldn't go for #4, not with the word predictable anyway. Predictable sounds to me like average, normal, nothing special etc. Just sounds a bit boring. I actually like #3 but could do with a bit more to the beginning other than just My Powerful..., but that's just my humble opinion.
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