So I took all of your advice --> This is the outcome. Thanks!
I took your advice:
1) Needed better copy - clearer message - etc.
2) Needed better CTA
3) Added social proof (might need more of this)
The one thing I still have to work on is the video, but I'm doing that now.
What do you think about the landing page now?
Edit: Also, someone asked for social proof on the increased revenue -- but I don't see how I can do that in a non-scammy way. I mean I can't give out the niche of my clients, so I would just be posting trimmed screenshots of income on paypal or something and that would look very unprofessional in my opinion.
Andrew Gould
Andrew Gould