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Feedback on JVzoo sales page

by FirstSocialApps
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So I decided that since I spend about 1/2 my sales income on Google and Facebook ads anyway I would create a affiliate offer on JVzoo, I figure if Im going to give 1/2 my gross away Id prefer to give it to another 'real' person and not some corporate giant.

This is our first time doing anything this as we always relied on PPC, can anyone please have a look at our current sales page and offer any feedback. *Note the video is not done yet and the offer is not active.

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Thanks so much.
#feedback #jvzoo #page #sales
  • Profile picture of the author Dlemon
    Nice page...how's the conversion on it?
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  • Profile picture of the author Robert Michael
    Sales page looks good, but the buy button isnt live.

    You need to enable sales for JVZoo products before anyone can buy.

    Also enable it in the marketplace for affiliates to be able to find & sign up.
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  • Profile picture of the author FirstSocialApps
    Originally Posted by FirstSocialApps View Post

    *Note the video is not done yet and the offer is not active.
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    I dont know how it will convert because the video is not done yet and the offer is not active, Yes I dont have it turned on yet in JVzoo because the video is not done yet

    While Im waiting for a video to be done I was just looking for the feedback of those that are more experienced in these things than I am.

    Thank you so much for taking the time to have a look and reply
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  • Profile picture of the author Robert Michael
    Ohh, didn't catch that part. Had quite a few drinks tonight. lol

    I do videos/voiceovers/stuff (when I'm not drinking, of course) so depending on what exactly you need done we might be able to work something out!

    Even if not, happy Halloween! Go have some fun!!
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    • Profile picture of the author FirstSocialApps
      Originally Posted by Whos That Guru View Post

      Had quite a few drinks tonight.
      Have one for me, Im stuck working.

      Anyone else have feedback? Dont be afraid to be candid you wont hurt my feelings
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      • Profile picture of the author Alex Cohen
        Originally Posted by FirstSocialApps View Post

        Have one for me, Im stuck working.

        Anyone else have feedback? Dont be afraid to be candid you wont hurt my feelings
        Until the video is available, the sales page can't be effectively critiqued.

        We'll also need to know if your prospects will be direct linked to the sales page, or if they'll go through a pre-sell process first.

        Alex
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        • Profile picture of the author FirstSocialApps
          Originally Posted by Alex Cohen View Post

          Until the video is available, the sales page can't be effectively critiqued.
          Alex
          Oh I wasnt aware of this, I had thought that the video was just a fraction of the sales page, are you saying that the video (if there is one) on a sales page is of such importance that it overshadows the rest of the sales page entirely?

          Its a JVzoo affiliate sales page, I dont know how the affiliates will get traffic there.
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          • Profile picture of the author Alex Cohen
            Originally Posted by FirstSocialApps View Post

            Oh I wasnt aware of this, I had thought that the video was just a fraction of the sales page, are you saying that the video (if there is one) on a sales page is of such importance that it overshadows the rest of the sales page entirely?

            Its a JVzoo affiliate sales page, I dont know how the affiliates will get traffic there.
            I wasn't sure if the video would be a full-fledged sales pitch or something else. But now that I know...

            Your sales page doesn't build value. At the very least, explain how many hours and/or how much money it cost you to get those apps written.

            Most affiliates will direct link. Which means you also have to build trust and believability in the sales page.

            If you want people to plunk down $197, you've got a lot more work to do.

            Alex
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            • Profile picture of the author FirstSocialApps
              Originally Posted by Alex Cohen View Post

              Your sales page doesn't build value. At the very least, explain how many hours and/or how much money it cost you to get those apps written.
              Can you elaborate further 'doesnt build value'? Considering that most of the other people who are selling apps like this charge an average of $97 per month I thought there was quite a bit of value. You think I should say the number of man hours that were put into these apps? I dont think I have ever seen an ad for a software product that dictated the number of man hours it took to develop. Can you give an example of an ad like this?

              Do you think a personal video of myself or a screen video showing the apps would be better? Or a hybrid?

              Thanks for your feedback.
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              • Profile picture of the author Alex Cohen
                Originally Posted by FirstSocialApps View Post

                Can you elaborate further 'doesnt build value'? Considering that most of the other people who are selling apps like this charge an average of $97 per month I thought there was quite a bit of value. You think I should say the number of man hours that were put into these apps? I dont think I have ever seen an ad for a software product that dictated the number of man hours it took to develop. Can you give an example of an ad like this?

                Do you think a personal video of myself or a screen video showing the apps would be better? Or a hybrid?

                Thanks for your feedback.
                You have to connect the dots for your prospect. Getting him to read the copy is tough enough, but now you want him to multiply $97 times whatever? Do it for him. State what the savings are.

                Each one of those apps would cost a certain amount to buy, right? If the total is significantly above $197, then state that number so they can see what a great deal they're getting. If it's not, explain how much it would cost to have a developer write them. See how either or both of those techniques increases the perceived value of your product?

                Demonstration is a great persuasion technique. So yes, showing your prospect how easy the apps are to use and how they benefit him would make your pitch more persuasive.

                Alex
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                • Profile picture of the author FirstSocialApps
                  Originally Posted by Alex Cohen View Post

                  You have to connect the dots for your prospect. Getting him to read the copy is tough enough, but now you want him to multiply $97 times whatever? Do it for him. State what the savings are.
                  Ahh yes I see what you mean, its not enough to give a bonus you need to tell them how much that bonus is worth. Thats a great idea, I cant believe I missed something so simple. Thanks a bunch.

                  And yes, the value is there, when I was freelancing I would have charged (and would have gotten, since I did FB apps many many times) around $500 for each of those apps, and around $1000 for the Tab Builder, to write it custom, so 4X$500+$1000 would be the value. It never occurred to me that people wouldn't know how much value is there or how much time it takes to write apps like these or the cost to hire a programmer to do them custom.

                  Thanks again for your great feedback.
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                  • Profile picture of the author Alex Cohen
                    You're welcome... I was happy to help.

                    Alex
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  • Profile picture of the author Niranpr
    Add scarcity for the price
    for example the price is dime sale and will be increase every... sales

    add price for each bonus segtion and in the end you can add value by tell people that
    you will get a valuable bonus cost...

    Give the example of your page that be created from your product
    and your bonus app.
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