What's wrong with my copy?
I'm not a regular over here in the copywriting section. I'm here because my sales copy is only converting at 1%. I followed the checklist in the sticky section, and had a few "non-copywriters" confirm that the copy is good. It's still doing a terrible job and I'm thinking that it's the sales copy causing it to convert so low. The product is $7 so it can't be the price point.
If anybody would take a look at it and let me know what I can do to improve it, or even give your insights as to what you think may be causing the low conversion rate if it's not the sales copy, that would be highly appreciated.
Please post below if you think you can help me out and I'll send you a PM with a link to my sales page.
Thanks in advance,
JaVaun T
Disclaimer: This is not an attempt to try and sell anyone. If you helped me out, and you decide that you want to take a look at my e-book, I'll send it over for free as a "thank you". The e-book has nothing to do with copywriting. I am simply requesting to post here and I'll PM you the link because I'm monitoring traffic on the sales page and keeping statistics.
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