Please read my outsourcer'er copy and let me know what you think...

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After all, it’s not like I’m going to rank on page 1 for every single keyword on Google, there’s plenty of keywords to go around, so why NOT share this key information with my fellow Warriors?

I’m sorry to say it, but most of the information you’ve been fed by the so-called “gurus”, I’ve found, after countless hours of actually TESTING, is dead wrong... Not only that, but it’s oftentimes COUNTERPRODUCTIVE to what ACTUALLY works with SEO, and what the Big G is actually looking for...

Have you been wondering why, after several weeks of linking, updating your site with fresh content, managing the On-Page SEO, and so much more, you still haven’t reached Page 1? Is it possible that you implemented poor advice, and this advice is holding you back? If you answered yes, then what are you waiting for? Get (product name) right away.

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How do I know this? I’ve seen several people implement these techniques, and not only find themselves OUT of the sandbox, but skyrocketing up Google’s rankings in a HURRY. No joke.

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- The key pages needed for every single website, before Google will even consider giving it a decent ranking. If you’re missing ANY of these, you’ll just be slogging through the mud wondering why Google doesn’t care about your site, no matter what you do.

- To EMD or not to EMD? THAT is the question, and you’ll find the answer when you’re reading this book...

- 10 tips that will make your On-Page SEO shine... Never do On-Page SEO again without reading this first! Google will reward you for implementing these strategies... big time.

- Do Social Signals matter (Tweets, FB Likes, Google +1’s)? If so, which ones, and which ones are the most important? Which ones does Google not really care about? I’ll show you right on page 5...

- What type of keywords should you be targeting if you’re looking to make the most $$$? Isn’t it time to find out?

You’ll get the answers to all of the above, and more!

What’s another major mistake, that many people make when doing their SEO? Failing to properly analyze the competition.

This is huge. When you pick up this book, I’ll show you the exact metrics I use to analyze them, and a FREE tool that goes with it... Stop spending a fortune on expensive keyword research. I’m going to show you something that you can use for FREE to analyze your competition, and pick the keywords that pay.

In this guide, I’m also going to teach you one little “ninja” trick, that you can do to your main keyword on your site, that not many people know about, to tell Google that this is the main one. When I first realized this, I had about ten sites shoot up for the keywords that I was aiming for, as opposed to just floating around the search engines for a bunch of RANDOM keywords. This is one thing, I haven’t seen taught ANYWHERE else (can you guess what it is?).

To EVEN further boost your ability to make sweet On-Page SEO that Google will know to rank, I’m also going to show you a FREE Mozilla Firefox add-on that will help IMMEDIATELY with all your SEO diagnostics, and show you where your On-Page SEO is lacking (man, I wish I’d known about this neat little tool when I was first starting out...

On Page 18 of the guide, you’re going to learn about a tool that’s both cheaper and easier to use than SEOPressor, that will cut your time optimizing your site in HALF, (literally)... I’ve been able to launch so many more sites on account of all the time I saved with this plug-in, AND it’s better overall, not just a timesaver...

Another key area where people tend to mess up, and miss BIG opportunities, comes in optimizing images for SEO... Most people have NO IDEA how important this is, but on Page 21, I’m going to show you exactly how to do it in such a way that Google will DROOL over...

A lot of people don’t even bother with images, thinking it’s not an important aspect of their On-Page SEO, but wait till you see the difference. Not only am I going to show you how to optimize all the images, I’m going to show you EXACTLY where to get them as well, and three different places to get them, so you you’ll have plenty of options when it comes to choosing images for your site.

Since the freshness update, people have asked me all the time, “Do I need fresh content?”, “Will Google penalize me if I don’t keep updating my site with new content”, and “If so, how often do I need to update my site with new content to keep Google pleased? Well, you’ll read into detail on this on pages 22 and 23, which will leave no questions in your mind as to how to handle Google’s fairly new “Freshness” Update. The answers might surprise you..

When I’m teaching one of my friends SEO, one of the first things I teach them after helping them set up their site, is “internal linking”, something that surprisingly few people in the industry know how to do well, and surprisingly, Google watches this very carefully, if you don’t link internally correctly, Google will hit you with some big penalties in the search engine, that can cost you some serious cash, so make sure you pay close attention when I go into that, or wonder why your site isn’t climbing the rankings, even when you’ve done everything else 100% right.

Also, can creating a forum, or a message boards, automatically get your site 100’s and 100’s of links to whatever website you want, and with WHATEVER anchor text you want? I’m going to show you exactly how it can, AND exactly how to do it, so that you’re getting tons of free backlinks straight to your site, regardless of whether you go around making forum posts or not (this trick has nothing to do with making forum posts on other peoples’ message boards, it’s WAY more crafty that, you’ll see .

Last but CERTAINLY not least, I’m going to teach you the MOST important part of Search Engine Optimization, and that is, of course: backlinking... Getting the right backlinks is so paramount, that knowing how to do this one thing right, can be the difference between succeeding, and failing with your SEO campaigns... It’s not surprising that when someone comes to me complaining that their site isn’t reaching the top of Google, no matter what they do, the first thing that I check is their backlinking strategy, to see if they’re making the right moves, or if Google is punishing them for using out-dated backlinking strategies and tactics..

The good news is that you DON’T have to spend a fortune on backlinks to get where you want to be in the search engines... All you have to do is read through my guide on backlinking, and you can make an Online business, out of a shoe-string budget, with SEO. It’s not that hard.

“What type of backlinks do I get?”

“How many of each type?”

“How many is too many?”

“How do I build quality backlinks for free?”

You’ll know the answers to all these questions and more, once you finish reading the book...

So, what do you do now? Go ahead and enter your e-mail address, so I know where to send your FREE copy of (product name), NO STRINGS ATTACHED. Just free value from me, to you.

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After spending countless hours, purchasing, downloading, and reading every single tidbit of information that I could find on SEO, and scouring the net for any little “tidbit” I might’ve missed, I finally put the pieces together, and “figured it out”... that is, learned all I needed to know, succeed with SEO...

(product name) was originally a book I used to gather my thoughts, and keep notes on all the best practices in SEO, and there was no way I was going to let anyone else get their hands on it...

But then, one night, I contemplated how much success, and help, I received from other members on the WarriorForum, through WSO’s, free posts, the War Room, etc, and thought why not? Why not spread the wealth of this information to my fellow Warriors? What do I have to lose?

After all, it’s not like I’m going to rank on page 1 for every single keyword on Google, there’s plenty of keywords to go around, so why NOT share this key information with my fellow Warriors?

I’m sorry to say it, but most of the information you’ve been fed by the so-called “gurus”, I’ve found, after countless hours of actually TESTING, is dead wrong... Not only that, but it’s oftentimes COUNTERPRODUCTIVE to what ACTUALLY works with SEO, and what the Big G is actually looking for...

Have you been wondering why, after several weeks of linking, updating your site with fresh content, managing the On-Page SEO, and so much more, you still haven’t reached Page 1? Is it possible that you implemented poor advice, and this advice is holding you back? If you answered yes, then what are you waiting for? Get (product name) right away.

You might be wondering, “I already implemented tons of “gurus” advice, is it too late for my site to recover?”. The answer is a resounding No. Though we may have some backtracking to do to get you back on track, it’s never too late, not even if you find yourself in the dreaded “sandbox”.

How do I know this? I’ve seen several people implement these techniques, and not only find themselves OUT of the sandbox, but skyrocketing up Google’s rankings in a HURRY. No joke.

I had one friend who implemented these techniques on a site that had been sandboxed for several months.... within a few days, he was moved out of the sandbox, and put on Page 3... He’s now in position #1, and enjoys a healthy monthly income because of it. An income that wouldn’t have been possible, had he tried to stick with the “normal” methods taught by the so-called “gurus”...

Just some of the things you’re going to learn in (product name) are:

- The key pages needed for every single website, before Google will even consider giving it a decent ranking. If you’re missing ANY of these, you’ll just be slogging through the mud wondering why Google doesn’t care about your site, no matter what you do.

- To EMD or not to EMD? THAT is the question, and you’ll find the answer when you’re reading this book...

- 10 tips that will make your On-Page SEO shine... Never do On-Page SEO again without reading this first! Google will reward you for implementing these strategies... big time.

- Do Social Signals matter (Tweets, FB Likes, Google +1’s)? If so, which ones, and which ones are the most important? Which ones does Google not really care about? I’ll show you right on page 5...

- What type of keywords should you be targeting if you’re looking to make the most $$$? Isn’t it time to find out?

You’ll get the answers to all of the above, and more!

What’s another major mistake, that many people make when doing their SEO? Failing to properly analyze the competition.

This is huge. When you pick up this book, I’ll show you the exact metrics I use to analyze them, and a FREE tool that goes with it... Stop spending a fortune on expensive keyword research. I’m going to show you something that you can use for FREE to analyze your competition, and pick the keywords that pay.

In this guide, I’m also going to teach you one little “ninja” trick, that you can do to your main keyword on your site, that not many people know about, to tell Google that this is the main one. When I first realized this, I had about ten sites shoot up for the keywords that I was aiming for, as opposed to just floating around the search engines for a bunch of RANDOM keywords. This is one thing, I haven’t seen taught ANYWHERE else (can you guess what it is?).

To EVEN further boost your ability to make sweet On-Page SEO that Google will know to rank, I’m also going to show you a FREE Mozilla Firefox add-on that will help IMMEDIATELY with all your SEO diagnostics, and show you where your On-Page SEO is lacking (man, I wish I’d known about this neat little tool when I was first starting out...

On Page 18 of the guide, you’re going to learn about a tool that’s both cheaper and easier to use than SEOPressor, that will cut your time optimizing your site in HALF, (literally)... I’ve been able to launch so many more sites on account of all the time I saved with this plug-in, AND it’s better overall, not just a timesaver...

Another key area where people tend to mess up, and miss BIG opportunities, comes in optimizing images for SEO... Most people have NO IDEA how important this is, but on Page 21, I’m going to show you exactly how to do it in such a way that Google will DROOL over...

A lot of people don’t even bother with images, thinking it’s not an important aspect of their On-Page SEO, but wait till you see the difference. Not only am I going to show you how to optimize all the images, I’m going to show you EXACTLY where to get them as well, and three different places to get them, so you you’ll have plenty of options when it comes to choosing images for your site.

Since the freshness update, people have asked me all the time, “Do I need fresh content?”, “Will Google penalize me if I don’t keep updating my site with new content”, and “If so, how often do I need to update my site with new content to keep Google pleased? Well, you’ll read into detail on this on pages 22 and 23, which will leave no questions in your mind as to how to handle Google’s fairly new “Freshness” Update. The answers might surprise you..

When I’m teaching one of my friends SEO, one of the first things I teach them after helping them set up their site, is “internal linking”, something that surprisingly few people in the industry know how to do well, and surprisingly, Google watches this very carefully, if you don’t link internally correctly, Google will hit you with some big penalties in the search engine, that can cost you some serious cash, so make sure you pay close attention when I go into that, or wonder why your site isn’t climbing the rankings, even when you’ve done everything else 100% right.

Also, can creating a forum, or a message boards, automatically get your site 100’s and 100’s of links to whatever website you want, and with WHATEVER anchor text you want? I’m going to show you exactly how it can, AND exactly how to do it, so that you’re getting tons of free backlinks straight to your site, regardless of whether you go around making forum posts or not (this trick has nothing to do with making forum posts on other peoples’ message boards, it’s WAY more crafty that, you’ll see .

Last but CERTAINLY not least, I’m going to teach you the MOST important part of Search Engine Optimization, and that is, of course: backlinking... Getting the right backlinks is so paramount, that knowing how to do this one thing right, can be the difference between succeeding, and failing with your SEO campaigns... It’s not surprising that when someone comes to me complaining that their site isn’t reaching the top of Google, no matter what they do, the first thing that I check is their backlinking strategy, to see if they’re making the right moves, or if Google is punishing them for using out-dated backlinking strategies and tactics..

The good news is that you DON’T have to spend a fortune on backlinks to get where you want to be in the search engines... All you have to do is read through my guide on backlinking, and you can make an Online business, out of a shoe-string budget, with SEO. It’s not that hard.

“What type of backlinks do I get?”

“How many of each type?”

“How many is too many?”

“How do I build quality backlinks for free?”

You’ll know the answers to all these questions and more, once you finish reading the book...

So, what do you do now? Go ahead and enter your e-mail address, so I know where to send your FREE copy of (product name), NO STRINGS ATTACHED. Just free value from me, to you.

Remember, nothing feels better than waking up one day to find that site you’ve been working on has now dominated your competition, and is sitting pretty at the top of Google, so pick-up (product name) right now, and I’ll show you just how to make that a reality.

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I just wanted to know what you guys have to say, give me honestly feedback on it, what do you guys think about the copy is it good or bad? Do you think it's going to convert? Should it be shorter or as it is? How is the copy itself, is it well written or lack of quality?

Paid $150... Refund or what?

Thank you,
Harry Nguyen
#copy #outsourcerer #read
  • Profile picture of the author TheSalesBooster
    It's bad. Get a refund.
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    • Profile picture of the author Cam Connor
      Originally Posted by TheSalesBooster View Post

      It's bad. Get a refund.
      How would you improve it? What do you think about it bad? Why do you feel it's not worth $150?
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  • Profile picture of the author Andrew Gould
    I'm afraid I'm struggling to read it at all, Harry.

    It's not well written - it's far too wordy, and the sentences and paragraphs are too long.

    And there needs to be some subheads in there for visual relief and to help people just scanning the copy.

    Now I've just made it to the bottom and discovered the offer's free.

    Yeah, this is just awful - scrap it.
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    • Profile picture of the author Jeremey
      Sorry Harry, the whole thing smells rotten...

      I lost interest right away (aside from the headline) when the copy claimed "everything the gurus say is wrong," and then the copy ticks off a number of the exact things that the SEO gurus (and anyone with any knowledge of SEO) are going to do to improve their SEO....So it just sounds like BS.

      I wouldn't sign up for this as a free report, because it sounds exactly like something that is going to build someone's list and give me no value whatsoever.

      This isn't delving into the issues with the copy, which begin with the headline and continue to the final sentence (though no one will read this far). Micah's right...It's a swipefested rehash of a thousand other sales letters with no appeal or direction.

      You've got a 1600 word sales letter for a free report that offers nothing of value.

      Should you get a refund? I say no. I say whomever you paid $150 to write this probably did the best they could and the onus is on you for hiring a $150 copywriter and then posting it on a copywriting forum for people who charge 10 times that much to give a free critique.

      So run your copy and see how many names you get.

      Then go back to your copywriter and make them revise it until you start getting a response.

      Or write off the $150, rethink your product, and spend some money on a proven copywriter.
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  • Profile picture of the author Micah Medina
    It's no good. The opening is a really generic story with no personality, and there's nothing to set it apart as a special product. It's one of those sales letters that's a cropped together rewording of a bunch of other similar products but doesn't have any emotional structure or appeal. Even for 150, try and get your money back.
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  • Profile picture of the author max5ty
    Before I got to the 3rd paragraph...

    I opened the window and started climbing.

    Wasn't easy...

    But I kept climbing.

    I'm now on the roof...
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    • Profile picture of the author Mark Andrews
      Banned
      Where I'm waiting twiddling my thumbs, waiting for your head to appear above the parapet.

      "Lovely evening Marcus, fancy a cuppa? Kettles just boiled."

      To the OP...

      Should you get a refund? I'm with Jeremey on this one. No. You shouldn't.

      This person who wrote your sales copy has obviously tried to do their best, even if it's not brilliant, they've still put the time and effort in to help you.

      Just because you don't like it, this is no reason to ask for a refund or worse to carry out a chargeback against this person if Paypal was used to make payment.

      In fact, I would say to whoever wrote this out for you that if you was to do a chargeback against them, to get your $150 back, that they call up Paypal directly on the phone and supply proof that the sales copy has been sent to you the client.

      Then I'd advise them to put the sales letter into a PDF, upload this file in the resolution center and tell PP on the phone that it's a service s/he offers rather than a tangible physical product and could he please have the money refunded to his account and the case closed.

      You the buyer, you have no right to ask for a refund in this instance. This guy has obviously done his or her best to help you and has sent the copy to you, otherwise you wouldn't be posting it up here for a critique.


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      • Profile picture of the author DubDubDubDot
        This work is a disgrace.

        Tell him your areas of concern and give him the opportunity to fix it. If he won't/can't then get your money back.

        Originally Posted by Mark Andrews View Post

        You the buyer, you have no right to ask for a refund in this instance. This guy has obviously done his or her best to help you
        Sometimes your best isn't good enough.

        There is something to be said about various price points, but there are also expected minimums and this material is unusable. It shouldn't be sold at any price. The writer should recognize that his work is mediocre and step away from selling while he refines his skills.
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      • Profile picture of the author Harry Nguyen
        Originally Posted by Mark Andrews View Post


        To the OP...

        Should you get a refund? I'm with Jeremey on this one. No. You shouldn't.

        This person who wrote your sales copy has obviously tried to do their best, even if it's not brilliant, they've still put the time and effort in to help you.

        Just because you don't like it, this is no reason to ask for a refund or worse to carry out a chargeback against this person if Paypal was used to make payment.

        You the buyer, you have no right to ask for a refund in this instance. This guy has obviously done his or her best to help you and has sent the copy to you, otherwise you wouldn't be posting it up here for a critique.


        Mark Andrews
        Yeah, he did put in all the hard effort, lesson learned though. That would be so wrong to do him like that, it's my fault. But, we got everything cleared up now
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  • Profile picture of the author Harry Nguyen
    Okay, thank you people for your responses.
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  • Profile picture of the author TheSalesBooster
    OP paid the guy to do a job. He shouldn't pay $150 so the copywriter can practice on his dime. That just sends a message that he can get away with charging $150 for that kind of work.

    This is the real world. Wake up and smell the coffee. You wouldn't pay a mechanic $150 to do a half ass'd job and say "well at least he tried".

    OP either get a refund or work with the guy on getting revisions done.
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    • Profile picture of the author Pusateri
      Originally Posted by TheSalesBooster View Post

      OP paid the guy to do a job. He shouldn't pay $150 so the copywriter can practice on his dime. That just sends a message that he can get away with charging $150 for that kind of work.

      This is the real world. Wake up and smell the coffee. You wouldn't pay a mechanic $150 to do a half ass'd job and say "well at least he tried".

      OP either get a refund or work with the guy on getting revisions done.
      You have no right to expect any better for $150. That's the real world.

      $150 gets you a beginner practicing on your fifteen-hundred dimes.

      At $150 it's a crap shoot.

      You might get lucky.

      Harry rolled snake-eyes.
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      • Profile picture of the author TheSalesBooster
        Originally Posted by Pusateri View Post

        You have no right to expect any better for $150. That's the real world.

        $150 gets you a beginner practicing on your fifteen-hundred dimes.

        At $150 it's a crap shoot.

        You might get lucky.

        Harry rolled snake-eyes.

        Your kind of thinking is the reason these cesspool copywriters stick around. They know they can get away with charging for garbage and people like you will say "Oh well, what do you expect for such a low price".

        Kick these people to the curb. If they are smart they will take a look at what they did wrong and come back stronger and better. Most of them won't because they are looking for easy money. I can see it now...

        The next big thing in internet marketing is going to be starting a copywriting service on warrior forums! All you have to do is read 1-3 books on copywriting and then you can start charging $150 per sales letter and it doesn't even have to be good!!! You can just pull the "I'm still learning card" and everything will be OK!

        ...

        Don't settle for crap work. That kind of attitude doesn't benefit anyone. They can't get better if you treat them like babies and pat them on the head for their good effort.
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        • Profile picture of the author Gengis
          Originally Posted by TheSalesBooster View Post

          Your kind of thinking is the reason these cesspool copywriters stick around. They know they can get away with charging for garbage and people like you will say "Oh well, what do you expect for such a low price".

          Kick these people to the curb. If they are smart they will take a look at what they did wrong and come back stronger and better. Most of them won't because they are looking for easy money. I can see it now...

          The next big thing in internet marketing is going to be starting a copywriting service on warrior forums! All you have to do is read 1-3 books on copywriting and then you can start charging $150 per sales letter and it doesn't even have to be good!!! You can just pull the "I'm still learning card" and everything will be OK!

          ...

          Don't settle for crap work. That kind of attitude doesn't benefit anyone. They can't get better if you treat them like babies and pat them on the head for their good effort.

          Glad you wrote this, i'm also with you on this.
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        • Profile picture of the author Pusateri
          Originally Posted by TheSalesBooster View Post

          Your kind of thinking is the reason these cesspool copywriters stick around. They know they can get away with charging for garbage and people like you will say "Oh well, what do you expect for such a low price".
          My kind of thinking says never pay $150 and expect a good sales letter.

          $150 is a fair price for a good headline or two, but when it comes to sales letters, $150 is a low-rent neighborhood. Good lives way down the road on the other side of the tracks.

          If $150 is all you can afford, and you can put a coherent sentence together, you are better off doing it yourself. At least you know your product.

          Kick these people to the curb. If they are smart they will take a look at what they did wrong and come back stronger and better. Most of them won't because they are looking for easy money. I can see it now...

          The next big thing in internet marketing is going to be starting a copywriting service on warrior forums! All you have to do is read 1-3 books on copywriting and then you can start charging $150 per sales letter and it doesn't even have to be good!!! You can just pull the "I'm still learning card" and everything will be OK!
          I didn't say to be uncritical. Feedback it good. Especially in when it comes from live-fire testing. The ones with any sense will absolutely come back stronger...and they won't be $150 anymore.

          Don't settle for crap work. That kind of attitude doesn't benefit anyone.
          And if you pay a dollar for a steak, don't be surprised if it's a bit green.
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  • Profile picture of the author 1robert
    Not all of the copy is bad.

    Scrap the 90% that is and have your copywriter do a rewrite. If the copy still sucks afterwords, then you have every right to get your money back.

    I would start with the headline. I had a hard time even understanding what the heck your copywriter was trying to say...and you should never include the product name in your headline.

    Here's one to get you started...

    "Warning: You Could Be Losing a S*%&Load of Sales If Your'e SEO Service Is Making these 6 Little-Known Mistakes...

    As far as a refund...I don't think you should get one if you're trying to get a "world class" sales letter for $150.00 when your'e driving a yellow Lamborghini
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  • Profile picture of the author fated82
    I would just add, the copy isn't enticing and I really didn't read pass the 5th paragraph. My advice is to either get a refund from the writer or work with him to improve your copy. As a buyer, you should expect quality from the seller.

    For me, at $150, that type of quality is unacceptable.
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  • Profile picture of the author ThomasOMalley
    You're not entitled to a refund.

    Here's a fact for you: You get what you pay for.

    If you ever think you're going to get good copy for $150, give your head a serious shake.
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  • Profile picture of the author RickDuris
    Look at it this way, and I'm sincere about it: You didn't pay for copy. You paid to learn a (really valuable) lesson. Definitely worth more than $150.

    Let'em keep the money. 150 bucks isn't going to change anyone's life. Recovering isn't worth the time or aggravation.

    And if $150 IS important to you, you shoulda cut a different deal.

    - Rick Duris

    PS: Harry actually did a cool thing. By posting the copy, he showed other marketers what you get for $150. Hopefully, they can learn from his mistake.
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    • Profile picture of the author Harry Nguyen
      Originally Posted by RickDuris View Post

      Look at it this way, and I'm sincere about it: You didn't pay for copy. You paid to learn a (really valuable) lesson. Definitely worth more than $150.

      Let'em keep the money. 150 bucks isn't going to change anyone's life. Recovering isn't worth the time or aggravation.

      And if $150 IS important to you, you shoulda cut a different deal.

      - Rick Duris

      PS: Harry actually did a cool thing. By posting the copy, he showed other marketers what you get for $150. Hopefully, they can learn from his mistake.
      I really appreciate the love bro, thanks for keeping it real with me. I did it just to see what people would say but also to learn from my mistake. It happens though, that's just life... And again, you get what you paid for.
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