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Example of a WSO sales page with great copy?

by paul nicholls
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Hey all

I'm looking for a good wso sales page example that i can take some copy tips from
and (that obviously converts well too)

There are simply too many wso's to go through in wso pro so thought I would ask here if you know of any particular ones that you know of that a good copywriter has put together

Thanks

Paul :-)
#copy #good #great #page #sales #wso
  • Profile picture of the author Alex Cohen
    Pretty tough to do without revealing a confidence.

    Successful WSOs get bumped repeatedly until they fatigue. So go through the first 10 pages or so and see which WSOs have a lot of views.

    That said...

    Both the offer and the copy contribute to the success of a WSO. Take that into consideration when doing your analysis.

    Alex
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    • Profile picture of the author copyassassin
      Originally Posted by Alex Cohen View Post

      Successful WSOs get bumped repeatedly until they fatigue. So go through the first 10 pages or so and see which WSOs have a lot of views.

      Both the offer and the copy contribute to the success of a WSO. Take that into consideration when doing your analysis.

      Alex
      Alex,

      You oughta read this report, it might reveal some WSO "secrets" you weren't aware of of:

      http://www.warriorforum.com/war-room...5-get-now.html

      Adam
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      • Profile picture of the author Alex Cohen
        Originally Posted by copyassassin View Post

        Alex,

        You oughta read this report, it might reveal some WSO "secrets" you weren't aware of of:

        http://www.warriorforum.com/war-room...5-get-now.html

        Adam
        Once again you make assumptions about someone you know nothing about. LOL

        Alex
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        • Profile picture of the author copyassassin
          Originally Posted by Alex Cohen View Post

          Once again you make assumptions about someone you know nothing about. LOL

          Alex
          You wrote about "Successful WSOs get bumped repeatedly until they fatigue."

          That isn't very true.

          MANY succesful WSOs aren't bumped at all. AT ALL!

          And THAT isn't an assumption.

          THAT is a fact.

          Mal has a great report on WSOs with interviews with Warriors doing WSOs, and their "bump" frequency.

          Worth reading. Although, maybe you already have.

          Adam
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          • Profile picture of the author Alex Cohen
            Originally Posted by copyassassin View Post

            You wrote about "Successful WSOs get bumped repeatedly until they fatigue."

            That isn't very true.

            MANY succesful WSOs aren't bumped at all. AT ALL!

            And THAT isn't an assumption.

            THAT is a fact.

            Mal has a great report on WSOs with interviews with Warriors doing WSOs, and their "bump" frequency.

            Worth reading. Although, maybe you already have.

            Adam
            Armchair Ph.D.
            I've also done a WSO analysis, but I used a different methodology than you did.

            The OP would do well to take my advice.

            And it would be good if you stopped telling me what I "oughta" do. :-)

            Alex
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            • Profile picture of the author copyassassin
              Originally Posted by Alex Cohen View Post

              I've also done a WSO analysis, but I used a different methodology than you did.


              Alex
              Please share...
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  • Profile picture of the author The Copy Nazi
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    I did a WSO last year that converted at 34% and made the marketer $15k overnight. I won't link - the other writers will get their knickers in a twist - but the writing was good. I get comments about it all the time. PM me and I'll point you to it.

    BTW its not just the offer and the copy that contribute to a WSO's success. It's vital you have a bunch of affiliates mailing for you too.

    And O.P. - it's "copywriter" NOT "copyrighter" (how many times have we seen that here?)
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    • Profile picture of the author BrainCopy
      Originally Posted by The Copy Nazi View Post

      I did a WSO last year that converted at 34% and made the marketer $15k overnight. I won't link - the other writers will get their knickers in a twist - but the writing was good. I get comments about it all the time. PM me and I'll point you to it.

      BTW its not just the offer and the copy that contribute to a WSO's success. It's vital you have a bunch of affiliates mailing for you too.

      And O.P. - it's "copywriter" NOT "copyrighter" (how many times have we seen that here?)
      Can I spy too?
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  • Profile picture of the author TurnRush
    I personally prefer simple clear WSO's, but there seems to be a hype with flashy, chaotic, promoting sales pages.

    Any marketeer can give a explanation for that?
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    • Profile picture of the author 0hyesican
      Originally Posted by TurnRush View Post

      I personally prefer simple clear WSO's, but there seems to be a hype with flashy, chaotic, promoting sales pages.

      Any marketeer can give a explanation for that?
      I don't write sales letters yet, but I do write a lot of covert copy disguised as "quotes" from business owners in press releases and blog posts.

      The best way to describe this is that people say "no" with the left or analytical side of the brain, but they say "yes" with the right or emotional side.

      The left side knows not to chase BSO's, but the right side is a sucker for them.
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