Request: Squeeze page headline critique
This is the headline that I want to use for my squeeze page.
Rip it up/shred it to pieces....be honest.
PS-I am not a copywriter.
Pre-headline: To people who want financial freedom-but don't know where to start.
HL: How a completely different approach to email marketing and list building took me from broke to quitting my job in just a few months-And I am convinced anybody can copy the lessons in this audio series, once they understand them.
Rip it up/shred it to pieces....be honest.
PS-I am not a copywriter.
Pre-headline: To people who want financial freedom-but don't know where to start.
HL: How a completely different approach to email marketing and list building took me from broke to quitting my job in just a few months-And I am convinced anybody can copy the lessons in this audio series, once they understand them.
"Creativity is overrated. Most business success comes from developing a system that produces consistent results." -Ray Kroc