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by TheNewGuy2010
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#critique #page #request #squeeze
  • Profile picture of the author DavidG
    The first main problem I notice is you don't have any proof.

    Everyone can claim their the best marketer in the world, but what kind of results have you made? What have you done before?

    The BEST client-acquisition squeeze pages I've seen work are the ones that teach something and then ask for the email.

    Your method could have worked in 2002 but in these times, you need to provide value and credibility for them to sign up.
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    • Profile picture of the author Johnny Danes
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      I read the same page as you. It never said he was the best in the world, it stated they were going to be taught by the best. It even spoke in 3rd person. The OP is not talking about himself, he's talking about someone else. That was very clear to me in the squeeze page.


      The OP never made a claim that he was the best. The person on the audios is the best and from the way it read, it's not the op, it's another person. I read that as big a day.

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      OP, good page. sorry you took it down. What I would do is craft different versions and test it. One thing about getting a critique, everyone and their mother is going to have something to say. The only opinions that matter are the people that are opting in.

      Create different versions than test and track.


      Good luck.


      Originally Posted by DavidG View Post

      The first main problem I notice is you don't have any proof.

      Everyone can claim their the best marketer in the world, but what kind of results have you made? What have you done before?

      The BEST client-acquisition squeeze pages I've seen work are the ones that teach something and then ask for the email.

      Your method could have worked in 2002 but in these times, you need to provide value and credibility for them to sign up.
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  • Profile picture of the author Robert Michael
    WTF are you guys talking about?

    All I see is __________________________________________________ ________________ in the OP....
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    • Profile picture of the author Johnny Danes
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      Originally Posted by Whos That Guru View Post

      WTF are you guys talking about?

      All I see is __________________________________________________ ________________ in the OP....

      He took the page down.
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  • Profile picture of the author Robert Michael
    oh.

    Well then. That is kinda stupid. Why post a thread if you only want the first 2 replies..
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    • Profile picture of the author Johnny Danes
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      Originally Posted by Whos That Guru View Post

      oh.

      Well then. That is kinda stupid. Why post a thread if you only want the first 2 replies..

      Changing your mind isn't stupid.
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      • Profile picture of the author TheNewGuy2010
        Originally Posted by Johnny Danes View Post

        Changing your mind isn't stupid.

        Hi Johnny,

        I did change my mind. I decided I was going to test and track to see how it does because as you stated, it could be a $25K sales page and people would STILL have something to say.....all day long.


        Thanks Johnny.
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        Retired Internet Marketer.
        Gone Fishing....
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      • Profile picture of the author BrianMcLeod
        Originally Posted by Johnny Danes View Post

        Changing your mind isn't stupid.
        You're right, changing one's mind isn't stupid.

        Posting a critique request, then freaking out over the first comment (that isn't even harsh) and posting a make-believe conversation with yourself using a second account...

        Now THAT is stupid.
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  • Profile picture of the author Robert Michael
    How am I supposed to know if he changed his mind or not? I didn't see the original post.

    I don't know what it said or what it was asking for.

    I just see two replies about something that I can't see.

    Therefore, one can only conclude that the OP was satisfied with just two opinions on whatever it was.. which could have been acquired by simply asking two people, instead of posting an entire thread.. lol ya kno
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