How can this commercial script be improved
The script is based on this ad:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/pxsxasr45x...on%20Video.mpg
Here is the first draft of the script
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...it?usp=sharing
Let me know what specifically you would improve and why.
Any input greatly appreciated!
Thanks guys!
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