Funny Bullet

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You guys wanna see a funny John Carlton bullet?

*Wrestlers the size of Jabba the Hut get tossed into walls like puppies by women!
#copy writing #bullet #bullets #funny
  • Profile picture of the author mgreener
    Funny? That's awesome! For a muscle building product?
    • Profile picture of the author Jeremey
      Great imagery...But maybe I'm looking at this wrong.

      Because what I see in my mind is women hurling puppies against the wall. Ouch. Is that what I'm supposed to be seeing?

      Or women hurling Jabba The Hutt against the wall as if he were only the size and temperament of a small puppy?

      My gut tells me it's the latter.
    • Profile picture of the author SamKane
      Originally Posted by mgreener View Post

      Funny? That's awesome! For a muscle building product?
      It was for a self defense course.

      Combat JKD | Chris Clugston
  • Profile picture of the author Mike Mendell
    Immediately after reading that bullet I thought:

    "Yeah right."
    • Profile picture of the author JasonParker
      Originally Posted by Mike Mendell View Post

      Immediately after reading that bullet I thought:

      "Yeah right."
      You have to keep in mind that this bullet was placed after logically building up to it.

      It wouldn't be even 1% believable just reading it outright like in a headline.

      And besides that... John Carlton is like the king of acknowledging disbelief.

      Once you have a full-on "yeah right moment" you better believe he's going to acknowledge it with something like, "You think it's too good to be true?" Then he'll back it up with testimonials, proof, reasons why, or whatever.

      And sometimes he seems to actually be looking for the "yeah right" reaction to a degree.

      He toes the line of believability.

      He likes to screw with your mind like that lol...

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