Hey everybody. This is my first time writing a sales letter. This for a local service. I would like to get some critiques on the letter so I can know if I need to tighten some of it up.
Are You Sick of taking that long walk to the dumpster to get rid of your trash? I might be able to help. |
I know you are frustrated with the hassle of taking your trash out to the dumpster once a week (or even worse everyday). It is cold outside this time of year, and nobody is looking forward to going outside, let alone walking and or driving 2-4 blocks to the dumpster. This has been an inconvenience to me over the last few weeks since the trash pickup stopped, and I am sure that you have been inconvenienced by this as well. Iíve watched as neighbors trash build up week after week with no solution to their problem in sight. Thats when I got the idea to take it upon myself to solve the problem that not only to my problem, but the problem of my community as well. I am offering to do a weekly trash pickup personally to your apartment, to save you the hassle of having to waste all that time and energy with taking the trash out to the dump yourself. It is cold outside, nobody wants to do this, and the leasing office doesnít plan on offering the service anytime soon. Allow me to save you the inconvenience.
Advantages of having a waste pickup service:
Enjoying the same peace of mind that comes from knowing that we are committed to providing you with on-time, every-time waste pickup as the rest of your neighbors.
We help you to save time on the stuff you donít really want to do, like taking a walk to the dump. While giving you more time to do the things you want, like relaxing after a long day.
Call me directly at xxx.xxx.xxxx to get started this week.