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Copy:
Hi Patrick. This may seem a bit odd and bold....
I know your Parents word-of-mouth is your strongest sales tool. What if I said you are missing at least 4-5 new students per month?
Together we can leverage the Social Proof of your parents and take it online. I want to build you a 5-Star Reputation Online that Forces Parents to Call You and not Huntington, Club-Z, and other competition.
Patrick, here is the catch...We Want to Do Your first Center FREE.
In exchange we ask you to promote our service to other Sylvan Learning Centers. And when you do, we want to compensate you.
I think this could be great marketing for your Sylvan. Let me give you a call to talk about this opportunity.
Let me know when would be a good time to talk, I am open.
Looking forward to hearing from you,
Chad Rudolph
Reputation Marketing Local
xxx-xxx-xxxx
xxx@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx.com
Ps. Attached is a before and after of your reputation. I think you should take a look.
- Jack Trout