I would love your feedback on my Copy
I am doing my first launch as a WSO. I have been studying and doing some Copywriting projects for a year or so now so I probably still suck.
Yet I have revised the copy 3 times my launch partner liked it but we both feel it is way too long. I have run it through the checklist above and added all of what I thought was relevant. Then I spent another week rewriting the copy.
So as far as feedback the best would be get rid of this part because. Or this could be better because or change this because. This way I can fix if for the launch. Also if there are any glaring errors i.e. you are missing, etc.
Thank You very much for your feedback.
You can see the current copy at:
(33) Sales Page Sample
PS Ignore the formatting as it will all be redone once the copy is final.
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