Looking for a critique with my first WSO copy
Have just set up a WSO in the Warriors For Hire section, and although I think I can offer an amazing service, I don't have much experience in copywriting and I do think the sales page can be improved.
Would love to get your assistance and any thoughts you guys could share on the copy on the link in my signature.
Looking to make edits to the page to make it read better/more engaging for viewers.
Cheers,
Adrian
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