How Would You Rate This Presell Page?
Hey guys,
I just created a presell page for my product. I'm targeting a very specific group of people and want to presell them before they go to my sales page (I'm having a top copywriter here on the WarriorForum do the sales page for me; I'll obviously post it once it's done... if you want to know who it is, just PM me) Here's the presell:
The Science of Getting Ripped | Proven Diet Hacks and Workout Tricks to Burn Fat and Build Muscle in Half the Time
In this presell I want to do the following things:
1). Have a really strong headline modeled after Ewen's amazing post
2). Provide information of value that people still will benefit from, even if they don't buy from me
3). Have a quick "About Me" blurb right on the page so people have some idea of who I am
4). Create enough intrigue in my call-to-action that people are enticed to click through to the sales page.
Am I breaking any copywriting rules? Is there anything that I'm completely wrong about? Any reason I should NOT start testing this right now?
Thanks,
Raza
I just created a presell page for my product. I'm targeting a very specific group of people and want to presell them before they go to my sales page (I'm having a top copywriter here on the WarriorForum do the sales page for me; I'll obviously post it once it's done... if you want to know who it is, just PM me) Here's the presell:
The Science of Getting Ripped | Proven Diet Hacks and Workout Tricks to Burn Fat and Build Muscle in Half the Time
In this presell I want to do the following things:
1). Have a really strong headline modeled after Ewen's amazing post
2). Provide information of value that people still will benefit from, even if they don't buy from me
3). Have a quick "About Me" blurb right on the page so people have some idea of who I am
4). Create enough intrigue in my call-to-action that people are enticed to click through to the sales page.
Am I breaking any copywriting rules? Is there anything that I'm completely wrong about? Any reason I should NOT start testing this right now?
Thanks,
Raza