Version 1 or Version 2? Pulling hairs out of my head!
I am pulling the hair out of my head, as I can't decide which style to go for.
I would appreciate it so much if you guys can give your honest opinions and tell me which version you would rather go for, for this specific product.
Below are links to the two versions, both with totally different angles and writing style. They are not designed yet, so please try and ignore the colours, size of headings, and overall design of them. Focus on the headlines, copy, flow, and wording of the letters, please. Also keep in mind that the FE price is $17-$27, which is a bit higher than your normal list building training course. This is more of a full blown video coaching offer. (These are only drafts, so small changes can still be made.)
Version 1:eliteimacademy.com/eema/wso.html
version 2: eliteimacademy.com/eema/indexnewsalespage.html
Tx a lot for any feedback. Feel free to tear it apart! lol
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