Please, critique my sales letter.
I was talking with Kyle Tully who was generous enough to give me some advice and he told me I should post it here on this board to get your advice too.
I have to admit I'm a little intimidated by it but how else am I going to learn.
Keep in mind that it's my very first sales letter (be gentle) and also that English is not my first language and over half of the page is stuff I copied/re-worked from PLR products I bought.
That's why I think I'm having a hard time making it flow from one paragraph to the next especially at the beginning.
Ok, so what do you think?
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Thanks,
Louis
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