Need some last minute suggestions from my COPY friends
I have my guitar package ready!!! Just need to put the finishing touches on my funneling technique...
I'll sum it up:
That's what I currently have... I just don't feel very persuaded with those phrases.I have a package that I'm selling that teaches people guitar.
I'm funneling people to that package from my Youtube channel and videos that gets about 1500 views per day. I'm funneling people from my videos through YouTube Annotations - I just have to make them more persuasive.
I also want to maximize my subscriptions to my Youtube channel, traffic to my website and most of all my "free report" - MY TOP SECRET GUITAR TIPS.
So for each video I currently the following annotations:
- "Subscribe" or "Subscribe For More Videos Just Like This One" - YouTube Subscribe Opt In
- "Get "My TOP SECRET Guitar Tips" Absolutely FREE!!! Click Here" - Makes people opt in to my e-mail list
And now for the most important...
- "Learn to play the guitar just like me! - Click Here and I'll reveal all my secrets to you and tell you exactly how I learned." - My package deal
Can some of you copywriting geniuses help me doctor them up a bit?
What do you think?
Any help is appreciated...
Thank you
JT
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