Please Review, Job Depends on it.
Ok, so I am tiring to get this entry level Internet Marketing Job.
(I have been looking for a Job like this for over a year now. Now's my chance and I don't want to mess this opportunity up.)
As part of the Interviewing Process I am required to write an ad on THIS(http://store.worldstart.com/product.php?productid=2074) product.
And it must be written in the style that they write in, which you can see EXAMPLES(http://www.worldstart.com/php/newsletters.php?cthtml) in their current newsletters to get a much better Idea of what I am talking about.
And IF they like my ad,
I am guaranteed an Interview.
I AM NOT asking you anyone to write anything for me.
I am looking for honest critics (with good intentions) that can point out what I am doing wrong (and right). Advice, Tips, Ect...
Getting this job is very important to me right now and I am focusing ALL my energy on it. Any help would truly mean a lot.
I have until tomorrow morning to get this done and here is what I got so far...
<ZipMagic Ad (Rough Draft)>
Amazing! Compression Utility!
Zip Better, Faster, and Easier!
Can Safeguard Privacy!
Free up TONS of Space!
Check For Viruses!
...And that's not even half of it.
<--------------------------------->
(notes for past readers)
(I know many of you have been emailing me about this amazing software and I am pleased to say that we are back in stock... for now. So for everyone that has been waiting patiently for a copy of this amazing software, simply click on the link below to order yours instantly!)
Click Below Serure your Personal Edition MagigZip!
http://store.worldstart.com/product.php?productid=2074
(Oh, and I almost Forgot to tell you, I'm marking this product 53% off, to make up for being out of stock! Now you can get It All for JUST $12.97! Enjoy!)
Get one NOW before the Masses gobble them all up!
http://store.worldstart.com/product.php?productid=2074
<--------------------------------->
ZipMagic
#1 Compression/Zip Utility
At first glance, ZipMagic kind of sounds like your run of the mill compression utility.
It's not, trust me, you have never seen compression/zip software like this ever before!
ZipMagic is a state of the art compression utility,
a powerful and easy-to-use tool that quickly zips and unzips your files
to conserve disk space and Greatly reduces e-mail transmission time..
Now, I know, you have seen and have probably used half a dozen of these tools
(winzip, 7zip, winrar, PKZip, winace, etc...) and you may like yours just the way it is.
"Don't fix it unless it's broke." Right?
Wrong... Dead Wrong.
Ignorance is Bliss but Not Smart (no offense).
So here's what you need to know, that is, to BE in the know.
First off, for all you die hard WinZip, Winrar, WinWhatever users out there..
I gotta tell you that the reason I got started with ZipMagic is because
I Was Fed Up of having to get new versions of WinZip that kept losing their
usefulness when the trial time expired.
Fact: Winzip and Winrar are some of the most popular compression utilizes today,
and last time I checked (Winzip & Winrar) could compress files up to 53%.
ZipMagic's Compression Rate? How about a Dominating 98%
Compression Ratio that makes people cry!
Photo Buffs! Check this out!
Now with you can Compress JPEG Photos and Images by up to 30%
with absolutely ZERO loss in image quality! This is truly ground breaking stuff that we
are talking about here, because NO other compression utility has been able to do this, not even close.
By Compressing all your files, just think of how much space you can free up on you PC or Mac!!! ("Wait...hold the phone, This program can actually work on my MAC?!?!")
Yes, ZipMagic eliminates PC to Mac cross-platform hassles (how sweet is that).
STOP "Snoopers" Dead in their Tracks!!
With an Insane 513-bit encryption you don't ever have to worry about somebody snooping around your stuff.
Cost? For a limited time get this Amazing Software for an extraordinary price of just $12.99 and US Shipping is Free!
To Get your Personal Edition MagigZip Right Now!
Click Here -> http://store.worldstart.com/product.php?productid=2074
PS: Still not sure if you need this Product? Try it out for 60 days, and if you don't like it send it back to us and we will give you a full refund. What do you have to lose?!?!
(I have been looking for a Job like this for over a year now. Now's my chance and I don't want to mess this opportunity up.)
As part of the Interviewing Process I am required to write an ad on THIS(http://store.worldstart.com/product.php?productid=2074) product.
And it must be written in the style that they write in, which you can see EXAMPLES(http://www.worldstart.com/php/newsletters.php?cthtml) in their current newsletters to get a much better Idea of what I am talking about.
And IF they like my ad,
I am guaranteed an Interview.
I AM NOT asking you anyone to write anything for me.
I am looking for honest critics (with good intentions) that can point out what I am doing wrong (and right). Advice, Tips, Ect...
Getting this job is very important to me right now and I am focusing ALL my energy on it. Any help would truly mean a lot.
I have until tomorrow morning to get this done and here is what I got so far...
<ZipMagic Ad (Rough Draft)>
Amazing! Compression Utility!
Zip Better, Faster, and Easier!
Can Safeguard Privacy!
Free up TONS of Space!
Check For Viruses!
...And that's not even half of it.
<--------------------------------->
(notes for past readers)
(I know many of you have been emailing me about this amazing software and I am pleased to say that we are back in stock... for now. So for everyone that has been waiting patiently for a copy of this amazing software, simply click on the link below to order yours instantly!)
Click Below Serure your Personal Edition MagigZip!
http://store.worldstart.com/product.php?productid=2074
(Oh, and I almost Forgot to tell you, I'm marking this product 53% off, to make up for being out of stock! Now you can get It All for JUST $12.97! Enjoy!)
Get one NOW before the Masses gobble them all up!
http://store.worldstart.com/product.php?productid=2074
<--------------------------------->
ZipMagic
#1 Compression/Zip Utility
At first glance, ZipMagic kind of sounds like your run of the mill compression utility.
It's not, trust me, you have never seen compression/zip software like this ever before!
ZipMagic is a state of the art compression utility,
a powerful and easy-to-use tool that quickly zips and unzips your files
to conserve disk space and Greatly reduces e-mail transmission time..
Now, I know, you have seen and have probably used half a dozen of these tools
(winzip, 7zip, winrar, PKZip, winace, etc...) and you may like yours just the way it is.
"Don't fix it unless it's broke." Right?
Wrong... Dead Wrong.
Ignorance is Bliss but Not Smart (no offense).
So here's what you need to know, that is, to BE in the know.
First off, for all you die hard WinZip, Winrar, WinWhatever users out there..
I gotta tell you that the reason I got started with ZipMagic is because
I Was Fed Up of having to get new versions of WinZip that kept losing their
usefulness when the trial time expired.
Fact: Winzip and Winrar are some of the most popular compression utilizes today,
and last time I checked (Winzip & Winrar) could compress files up to 53%.
ZipMagic's Compression Rate? How about a Dominating 98%
Compression Ratio that makes people cry!
Photo Buffs! Check this out!
Now with you can Compress JPEG Photos and Images by up to 30%
with absolutely ZERO loss in image quality! This is truly ground breaking stuff that we
are talking about here, because NO other compression utility has been able to do this, not even close.
By Compressing all your files, just think of how much space you can free up on you PC or Mac!!! ("Wait...hold the phone, This program can actually work on my MAC?!?!")
Yes, ZipMagic eliminates PC to Mac cross-platform hassles (how sweet is that).
STOP "Snoopers" Dead in their Tracks!!
With an Insane 513-bit encryption you don't ever have to worry about somebody snooping around your stuff.
Cost? For a limited time get this Amazing Software for an extraordinary price of just $12.99 and US Shipping is Free!
To Get your Personal Edition MagigZip Right Now!
Click Here -> http://store.worldstart.com/product.php?productid=2074
PS: Still not sure if you need this Product? Try it out for 60 days, and if you don't like it send it back to us and we will give you a full refund. What do you have to lose?!?!