[help] Is this a good title for my Ebook?

by sizzleld

Posted: 11 years ago 30 replies

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Hello Fellow Warriors

Im on the verge of creating my first ebook in order to start building my email list(finally!), and looking at what my content is about and the goal i want my audience to achieve, here is the title I have:

"How To Find Out Why You Snore and Eliminate It For Good"

I think it doesn't read right...what are your thoughts and/or recommendations?

Here is what's in the ebook:

- The Truth on why people Snore

- 4 Easy to follow Videos that helps you test exactly why you snore

- Discover the 12 reasons why people snore and exactly why you may snore

- Major snoring solutions revealed for each type of snoring so you arent wasting your time, energy and money on the wrong solutions

Its a short ebook, no more than 15 pages, but i know it will help my audience when they come to my website and have no idea how to stop their snoring or why they are snoring in the first place.

Thanks for any help or feedback with this question!

LaPrentiss

#ebook #good #title

ewenmack 11 years ago

The closer you can get to this the better,
because they want it gone and fast...

Snoring Gone in 5 Days or Money Back

A pill or something to cure it,
rather than read how to do it
is going to make the difference between night and day
to your response.

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Ewen
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praveenshkgp 11 years ago

4 proven sleep medicine doctor's secretes to kill your snoring in 8 days.(I think thats perfect)

you can add otolaryngologists or just doctor instead of sleep medicine doctor's.
HEY please reply and tell me what do you think about this title and you can use this title for your book without hesitation, just tell me what you think about it.
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- Jarvis Edwards 11 years ago
  
  I have a silly suggestion. Imagine a more "controversial" approach to "scare" them
  into learning more?
  
  I don't know if your eBook includes information on sleep apnea, but you could incorporate how sleep apnea is generally mistaken for snoring?
  
  Thus...it's possible their snoring could have deadly consequences if untreated?
  
  Here's an idea:
  
  "Learn How Snoring Can Kill and Get Rid of it in X days....etc,etc."
  
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SarahEmpower 11 years ago

"How To Find Out Why You Snore and Eliminate It For Good" - Sounds To Wordy

Could Snoring Kill ?
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- Brucef 11 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by SarahEmpower
  
  "How To Find Out Why You Snore and Eliminate It For Good" - Sounds To Wordy
  
  Could Snoring Kill ?
  
  Agreed. Tell the reader about the end result could be a better selling point.
  
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marc@clickbitz 11 years ago

Never Snore Again: Stop Snoring in X Days or Less
Stop Snoring Now
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- gerardleroux 11 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by marc@clickbitz
  
  Never Snore Again: Stop Snoring in X Days or Less
  Stop Snoring Now
  
  I agree with Marc. And I would add:
  
  "Never Snore Again"
  The 12 kinds of snorers and how to stop today, forever. Guaranteed.
  
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d3communications 11 years ago

Suggestion: address the "pain point" people have with snoring.

Is it killing them?
Do they have to sleep in a different room than their partner?
Keeping them from having a good night's sleep?
Making them less effective during the day?

Also, use the google keyword tool to find out what people are searching for connected to snoring...looking it up right now...ok

Snoring cures and remedies
apnea
How to sleep with apnea

...are the top three, so you might want to show this in your title somewhere (and use a subtitle,too)

"Cure Snoring in One Night:
Five Secret Remedies to Fix Sleep Apnea for Once and for All"

Or something alone those lines.
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arkina 11 years ago

I would leave off the "Learn Why You Snore" part, even though it will be included in the book and just have the title be "Stop Snoring for Good."
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- sizzleld 11 years ago
  
  Thanks for everyone's help with this!
  
  After much thought, I was thinking about making this book a pop up on my home page.
  
  And changing the angle of the book to a fear tactic built around choosing the right product for your specific type of snoring.
  
  The Ebook is more like a short report now telling people there reasons for snoring through videos so they can get the right product for their type of snoring.
  
  I don't know if I can post my site right here. If you saw the homepage this would all make complete sense.
  
  It can be found at antisnoringreports.com
  
  I'm re wording the report now but still need to revamp my title.
  
  Thanks for everyone's help, and keep it coming please!
  
  LaPrentiss
  
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sizzleld 11 years ago

So a title like "warning! If you don't know EXACTLY why you snore, grab this free report to discover the best way to stop snoring, guaranteed"

How's that?

Still long huh

LaPrentiss
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sizzleld 11 years ago

Disregard the last title I made. That's a headline for promotion and not the Ebook title.

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sizzleld 11 years ago

"Never snore again:snoring solutions that will bring you a good nights sleep
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sizzleld 11 years ago

"End snoring now: the snoring solution that will bring you a good nights sleep guaranteed!"
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- ewenmack 11 years ago
  
  People looking for information on the internet for snoring
  are mostly feebie seekers.
  
  They have no intention to buy.
  
  This is because they are in the
  early stages of the buying cycle.
  
  Compare a person who has decided they
  want a device, pill, or specialist medical help,
  these people are ready to buy.
  
  If you have one of those for the buyers then you are tapping into people
  who are willing to pay money, compared to the people you are going after.
  
  It's a case of your business model hasn't been thought through properly,
  not a magic headline going to save your ass.
  
  Best,
  Ewen
  
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sizzleld 11 years ago

Hi Ewen

Just wanted to reply to your comment real quick.
Looking at my analytics, people who normally land in the home page have reached that page through the search engines while looking for a snoring device. Not any specific product but snoring devices in general.

About 37% of the people who visit the home page purchase a product after visiting. Watching most of the traffic that goes there, I noticed how people go back and forth between devices trying to find which one works for them.

This book is a starting point for those people who need help with finding that solution.

I'm not trying to make a magic headline or bullet to save my ass, just trying to help the people who are having troubles with picking a solution who visit the homepage first.

The reviews work well for people who land, but I need to collect emails, so I feel creating this book will get a list going for me.

Thanks for the message Ewen

LaPrentiss
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- ewenmack 11 years ago
  
  Wow 37% purchase is fantastic!
  
  You say they are undecided which device to buy...
  then help them with tips on how to decide by "this device is best for this condition/situation" kind of thing.
  
  Leadpages will make it so much easier for you to
  set it up using the most up to date highest converting
  pages.
  
  Best,
  Ewen
  
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sizzleld

11 years ago

Thanks Ewen

Well the plan is to help through my Ebook in exchange for their email. Videos are in it as well as which device works for their specific reason for snoring.

The material is made, I just need a title for the book.

Thanks for your help

Laprentiss

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ewenmack

11 years ago

Originally Posted by sizzleld

Positioning what you have as a tool
gets a higher optin rates because
it's seen as easier and faster to get
the job done.

Best,
Ewen

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johndetlefs 11 years ago

I think the headline is fine, just get rid of the "How to" as it over complicates the phrase.

"Find out why you snore and eliminate it for good".

You could go further:

"Why you snore, and how to eliminate it for good"

I think you're on the right line though, nice and simple and not too tricky.
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website design 11 years ago

7 secrets to stop snoring forever - or - How to stop snoring in 7 easy steps
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ReferralCandy 11 years ago

I'd go for something along the lines of "Embarrassed by your snoring problem? Fix it, forever!"

I've always thought that it's important to emphasize the nature of the problem. If your customer doesn't have a problem, he doesn't need a solution.
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EdwardsBrothersMalloy

11 years ago

Sizzleld,

Some of the first suggestions with numbers in the title might work for you. Magazines have been using this strategy for years to get people to read. It is almost like a formula. Here is an interesting article on the topic.

» Why we’re seeing so many numbers in headlines JIMROMENESKO.COM

Best,

Matt

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marciayudkin

11 years ago

Just wanted to reply to your comment real quick.
Looking at my analytics, people who normally land in the home page have reached that page through the search engines while looking for a snoring device. Not any specific product but snoring devices in general.

About 37% of the people who visit the home page purchase a product after visiting. Watching most of the traffic that goes there, I noticed how people go back and forth between devices trying to find which one works for them.

In that case, this should be the idea - which snoring device - that's right in your headline!

How about something like this:

Snoring cures that really work: Find out which snoring cure will end your snoring easily and for good

Sounds like you do have a good marketing funnel going.

Marcia Yudkin

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max5ty 11 years ago

Was going through the posts I missed.

I know this is late but thought you might want to consider this:

Does Your Husband Snore?
15 Legal Ways To Silence Him
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elmo033057 11 years ago

I have a big problem with snoring. My doctor told me that it was definitely a matter of life and death in my case to wear a C-PAP machine. So dying from this is not just an exaggeration it is a serious fact. So you need to follow the advice of the people on this page and include this in the title of your ad.

Thought: Make sure you are legally covered on this topic. it is a very serious health risk and giving out bad advice may get you into trouble if you don't have enough disclaimers.

Just sayin'

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ScottDudley 11 years ago

Eliminate Snoring For Good

Short and straight to the point is the way to go in my opinion.
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- Arovax 11 years ago
  
  Agree with having a number in the title. Also, how about something related to leading a better life? People that snore also usually don't get a good night's rest, and much less the person sleeping with them.
  
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mrdomains 11 years ago

Snoring Kills - Stopping It Is Dead Simple

seriously:
5 simple tricks to stop snoring

people love "tricks"
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Raydal 11 years ago

"Stop Snoring Sooner"

Just love the alliteration.

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