NON-NATIVE SPEAKER: Please critique my "Warriors For Hire" offer
I'm about to launch my first WF offer, but I have a bit of a problem: I'm not a native speaker and my copy might have some grammatical mistakes and be a bit clumsy to read.
I offer minisite design, so I don't really have much to say, instead I let my work samples speak for themselves, so there's almost no text. This is really going to be quick.
So here's my offer:
Hello, I suppose you are an experienced Internet Marketer, and want to ask you 3 simple questions:
- Are you tired of ugly websites and landing pages that infest internet?
- Do you want to stand out from the heap of those "monsters"?
- Do you want to have high credibility, so your customers will trust you more?
If you've answered YES to any of those questions, then you've probably been thinking about getting a custom designed website which fully corresponds your needs and needs of your customers.
If so, then I'm very happy to be at your service.
My name is Valentin Spitsyn and I'm an experienced web-designer. I'm not going to waste any time and qualify myself in this thread and let my work samples speak for themselves:
You can also customize these packages with additional graphics on your choice:Please ask your questions and place your orders in this thread, I will answer them shortly.
- Video Player Box
- Text Formatting
- Flash Animation (animated headers, ecovers, etc)
- Other Custom "Call To Action" Graphics
Regards,
Valentin Spitsyn
Saya Mau Makan Angin - I Want To eat The Wind (Why not?)
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Len Latimer
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