My first copy ever--Please critique, would appreciate all the help I can get!
I have been trying to have other people write for me for some time. Ofcourse I could not hire expensive writers. So I finally decided that I was going to write my own copy.
Now I am not a writer and neither am I a native speaker. So I know there are gramar mistakes. I will have someone edit the english after I finish everything else.
But for now all your feedback to help me improve this page and conver will be appreciated.
Thanks in Advance to all of you!
-Magic
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