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Can you please look over my membership site?

by Sirius Lin
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Hi guys,

Just launched a membership site, and I'd love to get feedback on the sales copy, the layout, etc. Anything that you can think of.

IM Weekly News

Thanks in advance for your help!

~ Sirius
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  • Profile picture of the author Zachary R. Skinner
    First, you really need to fix that orange bar at the top in your header, it's very distracting

    Now try this for a headline:

    Quit Wasting Your Precious Time Struggling To Earn A Living And...

    "Discover Proven Marketing Secrets That Will Send Your Bank Account To The 6 Figure Dimension And Leave Your Boss On The Floor Crying!"

    I admit, I got a little creative here but I'm kind of bored at the moment. I'd be curious to see how well this headline works, if at all.

    PS- I really like the exit pop up and overall graphic design.

    PPS- I love the overall concept of your product here. There really is too much information out there and having someone compile the important stuff and send it to my inbox is very convenient and incredibly time saving!
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    • Profile picture of the author Sirius Lin
      Hi Zachary,

      First off, thanks for taking the time to look over my site!

      Originally Posted by Zachary R. Skinner View Post

      First, you really need to fix that orange bar at the top in your header, it's very distracting
      Really? I thought it looked a bit different from all the other designs out there Can a few more people chime in about this before I take it up with my site designer?


      Now try this for a headline:

      Quit Wasting Your Precious Time Struggling To Earn A Living And...

      "Discover Proven Marketing Secrets That Will Send Your Bank Account To The 6 Figure Dimension And Leave Your Boss On The Floor Crying!"

      I admit, I got a little creative here but I'm kind of bored at the moment. I'd be curious to see how well this headline works, if at all.
      That's an interesting headline, Zachary, but I'm not sure it fits with the product I'm selling? I'm essentially selling summarised IM information, not information on how to leave your job (at least, not directly). Can you please explain why you came up with this headline? I'd love to understand your reasons behind it!


      PPS- I love the overall concept of your product here. There really is too much information out there and having someone compile the important stuff and send it to my inbox is very convenient and incredibly time saving!

      Thanks! I've been working on this project for a while now, and this week I'm letting my beta testers have first shot at gathering referrals, so I don't begin promoting the site until the 9th. I hope that this membership, priced for easy access, will be helpful to a lot of overwhelmed IMers (like myself)!

      ~ Sirius
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      • Profile picture of the author Jim Burney
        Hi Sirius

        The orange bar does not distract me.

        So I would think you may need to test this.


        There is one item that concerns me and there again it may be just a personal choice thing.

        It is above the fold again and I only realised when going to look at the orange bar issue.

        There is a lack of symmetry between your pic and the pic in the testimonial. It just

        appears a little odd to me.

        Regards

        Jim
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        • Profile picture of the author Sirius Lin
          Hi Jim,

          By symmetry, do you refer to the fact that Bryan's photo is cropped such that he's slightly towards the left of the photo, while I am centralised? If that's the case, I've the original and I can sort that out.

          Let me know if that's the issue!

          ~ Sirius
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          • Profile picture of the author Jim Burney
            Hi Sirius

            Perhaps I am being a little too harsh but I think the testimonial of Bryan's is in the wrong place.

            I think it would look better a little lower down your sales letter.

            Or perhaps you could try taking the background color off this particular testimonial. Or even try putting your pic center aligned.

            Comments from others would help

            Best

            Jim
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