Home Page Copy: Please Help
Several phrases are based on keyword research so I am also hoping for higher conversions (aren't we all!) as well as more traffic.
You can see how each line starts and the parts that are underlined.
Previously I described the product instead of stating what is in it for the client.
However the copy still seems weak.
Any suggestions for improvements are definitely welcomed.
Market Swings - Stock Market Training & Education by Marcel Springorum - Ireland
I'm in the process of creating more products to sell which wil be marketed to my list with the 'benefits' of the product described.
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