What do you think about my new sales page?
I've gotten sales and reviews already but I want to expand to a very high position in the market so I've been working to make this page highly enticing, and I would love your input on how I can improve the page. Don't hold back on your opinion.
Also, I'm not exactly a veteran copywriter, and this is only like the 3rd or 4th sales page I've ever made, so I wouldn't mind some validation too - so I know what's good and what to keep. Too much criticism can make me doubt everything I've made, so a little positive feedback in addition to the criticism doesn't hurt.
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