Landing Page Critique
I know you're all busy but if you happen to have five minutes of free time, I'd really appreciate it if you could take a look at the first 'final' draft of a landing page my friend created. I want to give him some advice but as I'm not a good copywriter I figured he'd be better off listening to advice from people that are.
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Regards,
Tejabuu
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