[Critique request] Please give me you expert opinion on how to improve this ad copy
I will be launching white label rights to a Wordpress plugin,
and I wanted to make sure that my ad copy is on point...
Can you please take a look and give me your expert opinion?
http://georgekatsoudas.com/pwl
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Update: Here's the updated version of the salesletter, based on the feedback I'm getting:
http://georgekatsoudas.com/pwl/index2.html <<== Please, provide new feedback for this link, not the one above.
I will still leave the earlier version up for the benefit of everyone who wants to see how a salesletter can be improved with great feedback like the one provided below. Please provide feedback on the 2nd link from now on.
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A few important things:
- the youtube video doesn't work yet
- I haven't added any testimonials yet
- there are no images on the page yet
Type of feedback I'm looking for:
- can you understand in a few seconds what is being sold?
- would you change something in the headline or subheadline?
- would you remove or add something to the ad copy itself?
- any other thoughts you have
Thanks in advance for your feedback - I really appreciate it!
George
Wealthcopywriter.com :)