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I'm not sure if this is an appropriate question, but:
I've been selling a buffered form of vitamin c in our country, with modest success.
I want to improve my sales by adding direct mail and email marketing in my campaign.
Problem is, my copy sucks.
I was wondering if anyone can give me a few pointers to get me started.
(with the copy)
Anyways, here are some information:
Me & my wife got into selling vitamin c almost by accident,
his dad had macular hole, where we consulted with different
traditional doctors. With the CAM doctor his condition improved
in a few short weeks, and the recommendation for operation was
cancelled by the previous traditional doctors.
I've had fatty liver. A traditional doctor expected 1 year treatment.
I got cured in 3 weeks following the CAM doctor.
I researched this field, went through seminars conducted by the CAM
doctor, and even passed 2 exams he gave, in order for me to sell
buffered vit c.
In our country, vitamin c megadose is relatively unknown.
Megadose has plenty of benefits:
- it results in youthful skin, bones, blood vessels
- it gives you more energy, especially if you are stressed all the time
- it is far more effective in handling a number of cardiovascular diseases than traditional methods
- has other therapeutic benefits as well: lowers blood sugar for diabetic people, controls thyroid hormone,
- it lightens skin (in our country, lighter skin = prettier)
- it (minimally) helps in burning fat
- chelates heavy metals, preventing a number of diseases including Alzheimers'
Research in megadose dates back to doctors who use it since the 1930's,
combination of oral and IV. Currently, practitioners of megadose vit c are
plenty, with great success.
Megadose is used in complementary and alternative medicine,
which a lot of popular celebrities are now into.
Buffered > Ordinary ascorbic acid because
Ordinary asc acid irritates the stomach, and fat in diets interferes with vit c absorption,
so its better to take it before meals, which you can't do with ordinary asc acid
Most people have health problems even if they don't know it, specially
those who work in cities. Once they take the product, they notice results
within just a few days.
Animals product their own vitamin c, at relatively high levels, humans can't.
Most animals don't develop wrinkles (vitamin c is high ->
collagen is preserved -> healthy arteries, bones, muscles, cartillage, & skin)
Megadose usually results in balanced hormones, meaning those with menstrual
cramps usually report great relief, even never experiencing it again;
those with acne lose it drastically
The former president of the national association of doctors in our country
tried it (vit c high dose) on 2 patients, one with Lupus and the other
with cancer. Both cases were cured.
I have dozens of testimonials, with different health/vanity concerns.
Bulk of my clients come from referrals: most of them got interested because
they saw the effects of a friend or a relative.
Skepticism is high, since there are a number of health products.
Our products' price is affordable, not cheap.
But in comparison to other products that do the functions, is a lot cheaper.
Only 8% of Hypertensive medication costs
15% of SKin lightening costs
Human nature applies here: you don't think of your health until you
feel the pain. Younger clients look for the vanity side (lighten, fat burning,
clear skin)
About 60% of my clients are 40years old and above.
I have some Gary Halbert and John Carlton swipes (I found from the web)
And got Harlan Kilsteins' (from his website) as well.
Whatever you need, my high converting copy puts more money in your pocket. PM for details. 10 years experience and 9 figure revenues.
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