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Need help with email blast copy

by Djman77
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In my newsletter we have about 400 words.

I try to tell all about the business and feel its too much.

Should I cut it down and say things to try and get the people to the website or want to go see about the website?

Isnt that the goal.

Do we have any wedding copywriters on here?
#blast #copy #email
  • Profile picture of the author lotsofsnow
    The ideal length of an email is what you have in your post above.

    50 words, 100 words and maybe, maybe 200 words.

    Just tell them to go to your web site. Short sentences. Tell what you have and where you have it and why they should go.

    ==============
    Pink wedding dress?

    OMG. Yes, that is what I thought when our man in Paris called me
    about this new collection and they were all pink.

    But they are beautiful. Something different.

    Click here to see for yourself!

    Have a nice day!

    Djman


    PS:
    They are on sale today!
    =================

    And then they go to your site and you better have a bunch of beautiful pink wedding dresses there.
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