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How To Get A High Quality Home Renovation At A Guaranteed Price, Finished Precisely When We Say It Will Be - Or We Pay You!
Dear Homeowner,
If you don't want to compromise on the quality of your home renovation, and... are scared your going to be overcharged or watch as your contractor misses the deadlines... then I have exciting news for you.
Here is what this is all about: My name is X and I have been on job sites with my father since I was 12. Together we run and operate a home renovation company. Our renovations have even been featured in Home & Garden Magazine. In fact some of our clientele includes...
A Vice President of Shell Oil
Billionaire Oil Magnates Who Cannot Be Named Publicly
CEO's of multi-billion dollar companies in Calgary
The #2 Plastic Surgeon in Western Canada
And More!
You would think with such a prestigious clientele we would charge sky high prices. Many people are shocked when they discover our prices are quite competitive. Considering that Home & Garden put our renovation on their magazine, you dont have to guess that we produce very good work.
The secret is my fathers craftsmanship. For over 35 years he has studied virtually everything he can about home renovations. He knows how to build a home from the ground up. You can ask him any question about a home renovation, and either he knows the answer - or has someone on speed dial who is an expert in the topic. With that kind of knowledge base, built up over a lifetime of craftsmanship - he has become a master at producing beautiful work. Whats most surprising is we can create solutions that will work for your budget.
How is this possible? Two reasons:
1. A large part of the cost is the materials you choose to use. If you want to save money you dont need to go with exotic woods or imported italian marble
2. The labour required for a job is dependent on the complexity. The more complex you make the renovation the longer it takes. If you want the job done quickly without compromising quality we can offer you simple and beautiful solutions that are economical.
Even better, we guarantee our price or we will eat up the cost of anything that goes over it. So the price we quote you is the price you pay, and not a dime more. If there is any additional costs, we will be the ones to bear the cost, not you.
There is only one exception to this guarantee. That is, if you decide to add anything on that you didn't request when we quoted you the price. For example if you decide that you like your kitchen renovation so much that you want to do the bathroom too - then you have to pay extra for that. Of course, we will put everything in writing so its absolutely clear what you are paying for and precisely what you will get.
Even more exciting, we will deliver the work on time or we will give you a $100 discount on the price for every day we are behind if we cant! There is an exception to this, which is that we need to have undisturbed access to your home when you say it is available.
So if, when we quote you, you say we can work from 8 am to 5 pm and for two days we are not able to do that because of some fault on your end, then we are not liable for those days. However, if your house is available to be worked on during the time you told us it would be available, then we are liable for any missed deadlines.
We normally have a long waiting list, but we just had a cancellation for a very large job that was going to take several months. This has created a sudden and unexpected opening in our schedule.
So, we have created this advertisement to fill the sudden opening fast so we dont waste our time. If you act quickly, we might be able to fit you in our schedule before moving on to our other projects. Call xxx-xxx-xxxx immediately if you are at all interested before someone else fills our schedule.
We guarantee to provide you with a quote within 48 hours of calling us or we will give you $20 in cash!
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