My Landing Page Sucks. Nobody's clicking/nobody's buying. Please help.

Tim R

10 years ago

Why do all this when you can just hire someone on Fiverr to set up your landing page for you?

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cassidywilliams

10 years ago

Wow, just what I needed.

Fiverr landing page is exactly why people are not getting results. This stuff requires actual effort.

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cbx 10 years ago

Yeah, I'm currently in the process of doing a ppc campaign using a squeeze page that was done by a fiverr and the copy from another fiverr and that thing is bombing right now.

On a side note, I'm a little peeved at wf. I tried posting my thread about this exact issue and it wouldn't do anything. I thought it might be a matter of processing or something and here I see this thread posted.

Anyway, I'll take a look at your squeeze and see what I can advise (or learn).
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Tim R 10 years ago

Originally Posted by cassidywilliams

Wow, just what I needed.

Fiverr landing page is exactly why people are not getting results. This stuff requires actual effort.

You think? Lol :rolleyes:
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cbx

10 years ago

Oh, your selling. I misread.

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shawnlebrun

10 years ago

Damn good share...

You'd like to think that a lot of that would be refresher material for most folks on here... but...

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Deni Ivanov

10 years ago

I have actually read a ton of stuff about landing pages and this post is not bad at all. In fact to make sure that you're having the right landing page, I'd get one done using this article and another one done by someone on Fiverr and run a split test on Google Analytics. There was a program that would do that for you but I'm just missing the name of it right now. It runs two different designs on the same page and the analytics takes the results of both pages, leaving you with the final result on which one is the better in converting your visitors to actual buying customers.

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Tim R

10 years ago

Originally Posted by Deni Ivanov

In fact to make sure that you're having the right landing page, I'd get one done using this article and another one done by someone on Fiverr and run a split test on Google Analytics.

Clearly sarcasm doesn't work too well on this forum.

DO NOT hire someone off Fiverr to do your landing page. I was joking when I posted that.

If you want to see why it's a bad idea, check out this result http://www.warriorforum.com/copywrit...ge-bombed.html

Good example of what not to do, but Shawn's post is a great example of what you should do.

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Kellilynn Hann

10 years ago

I took a look... What are you selling? It's not 100% clear. As the consumer, I don't know what you're offering or why I should act (what the benefit is to me and why I should do something right now). Then, when I tried to scroll, a very annoying pop-up came up that I couldn't get rid of unless I clicked a rather insulting, "No thanks I create ugly landing pages" or something like that.

My guess is too many distractions and mental clutter and not enough benefit-driven text with a clear CTA.

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The Copy Nazi

Banned 10 years ago

Originally Posted by Kellilynn Hann

I took a look... What are you selling? It's not 100% clear. As the consumer, I don't know what you're offering or why I should act (what the benefit is to me and why I should do something right now). Then, when I tried to scroll, a very annoying pop-up came up that I couldn't get rid of unless I clicked a rather insulting, "No thanks I create ugly landing pages" or something like that.

My guess is too many distractions and mental clutter and not enough benefit-driven text with a clear CTA.

Um...I'm not selling anything. I'm pointing you to an excellent article on landing pages. As the author says...

I identify where websites are leaking money and help fix them.....

This blog is all about getting more results from your website.

The title of this thread was just to get your attention. The regulars here get it - hence the "Thanks". Looks like you didn't even bother to read the page. Too bad. It's brilliant. Perhaps you should learn the difference between a "landing page" and a "blog post".

I agree about the annoying pop-up though.

(Wanders off muttering "this place"...)

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Kellilynn Hann

10 years ago

Originally Posted by The Copy Nazi

Um...I'm not selling anything. I'm pointing you to an excellent article on landing pages. As the author says...The title of this thread was just to get your attention. The regulars here get it - hence the "Thanks". Looks like you didn't even bother to read the page. Too bad. It's brilliant. Perhaps you should learn the difference between a "landing page" and a "blog post".

I agree about the annoying pop-up though.

(Wanders off muttering "this place"...)

WTF, dude, take a pill.

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AntonioSeegars1

10 years ago

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The Copy Nazi

Banned 10 years ago

Originally Posted by AntonioSeegars1

His mistake was using a warrior forum thread as a lead off to another site. This tends to piss people off.

Linking out "Tends to piss people off"? Oh the poor petals - they have to exercise their finger... and brain.

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AntonioSeegars1

10 years ago

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The Copy Nazi

Banned 10 years ago

Originally Posted by AntonioSeegars1

My mistake. I meant to say that Bait-And-Switch tactics piss people off.

You see my pointing you to a resource as a "bait and switch tactic"???? Bizarre. Do you even know what a "bait and switch" is?

Bait-and-switch is a form of fraud used in retail sales but also employed in other contexts. First, customers are "baited" by merchants' advertising products or services at a low price, but when customers visit the store, they discover that the advertised goods are not available, or the customers are pressured by sales people to consider similar, but higher priced items ("switching").

Anyway...here's another good resource - courtesy of Joe Golfer - nothing to do with me (apart from the fact I've done stuff for the owners Ryan Deiss, Perry Belcher and Frank Kern) - 43 Split Tests That Boost Conversions

How's that for a "bait and switch"?

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art72

10 years ago

First off, that was a great read... now if only people could actually read, nah... that's another story.

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melonsmusic

10 years ago

For fear of getting my head bit off..... When I 1st looked I thought how boring the 1st image and paragraph are... and is there such a thing as a Step Zero? But its concisely laid out and fairly easy to follow, albeit long...Not sure I would make it to Step 6 but I would be more inclined to get to step 5, and then if there was a click for more and I was engaged, I would be more inclined to click for the 2nd page. I just find long pages overwhelming before I have begun.....so it might put some people off, or maybe its just me . Really good content though.

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webcosmo

10 years ago

You only get what you sow. If that`s a Fiverr landing page, then expect fiverr results

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Jeff Gilbert

10 years ago

I am truly amazed at some of this commentary. You're being given a great resource and you think he's asking for advice!!??

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Arzak 10 years ago

Originally Posted by Jeff Gilbert

I am truly amazed at some of this commentary. You're being given a great resource and you think he's asking for advice!!??

Nah, he's clearly trying to sell something!
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melonsmusic 10 years ago

Originally Posted by Jeff Gilbert

I am truly amazed at some of this commentary. You're being given a great resource and you think he's asking for advice!!??

Yes was aware of that, but still feel my points were valid. Lots of people on here swear by constructive criticism
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- Tim R 10 years ago
  
  Originally Posted by melonsmusic
  
  Yes was aware of that, but still feel my points were valid. Lots of people on here swear by constructive criticism
  
  Who are you trying to give constructive criticism to? The site you're critiquing has nothing to do with anybody on this forum.
  
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theconversionwriter

10 years ago

That is quite a great resource! Its quite hard to find good quality info on landing pages. Especially about ones that isn't all Hype.

Definitely bookmarking this one

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