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Sales letter feedback? PDF Included!

by screwaverage
2 replies
Hello all.

I have just completed my first online product, which is a personal development book that will be marketed to the success/slight edge market. It basically sums up the most important ideas I have learned after devouring self help materials for years.

I have attached a PDF of the copy content. I basically just hammered this out quickly, and will be heavily editing and making it look professional on the site. I am looking for some feedback on the basic content.

Thanks, and all suggestions are welcome.
#feedback #included #letter #pdf #sales
  • Profile picture of the author ThomasOMalley
    A tip for the future: why should we spend time giving you ideas and helping when you admittedly just throw up your copy?

    Spend some time putting some real effort in and you get some "real effort" in responses.

    Do what you say: don't be average in your effort.
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    • Profile picture of the author James Clouser
      Thomas is right.

      The most important part of writing copy is the research, planning, and development of the message.

      Developing key sales angles... determining how to approach your audience based on their level of awareness... and bulleting the project are just a few critical stages of that development.

      You get out of your copy what you put into it.

      Also, you might want to put up a landing page when you ask for critiques on the forum. I don't know about everyone else, but I'm not willing to download a PDF file from someone I don't know.
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